wow!

That was a good ending!

nice

Great Fanfic.

Thank you Z_J. I am Javillan. I finally got a profile on FanFiction. Net. Yeah for me. Thank you for noticing me and i am so glad that you liked the poem. Thank ya.

Nice beginning! Its really cool! x

Wow. I have waited so long for this story to update and update, and yet here is the update with the ending coming in second. Honestly, i really wasn't expecting you to end it so soon. Logically, i should have seen it coming; but my feeble brain didn't want me to. This has got to be one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. I loved it from the beginning to the end. You kept the reader hooked with what you gave them and always kept me on the edge of my seat. That is what made your story exceptionally good. I love how you explained your physical fight triangle with Seto, Joey and Bakura. The details made it so i could envision everything! I was even surprised that you even had a little KaibaxSerenity going on. heh...But nonetheless, your story still goes above a lot of what i have read.

But there is one thing i have to congratuate you on. You never _ever_ made the main characters OOC. It's very hard to write a fanfiction and keep to their true identities. And you did it perfectly. I loved the ending. Even though kaiba and Joey made ties in the end, they will never admit that they worked together. They will call each other names until the end of time, and yet, not mean a single bit of it because of what they had gone through _together_. Great job! and keep up the excellent work!

yay!you finally updated _. loved the ending. You captured joey's and kaiba's relationship perfectly. i hope to read the rest of your fanfics soon.

CONGRATS ON COMPLETING AN AWESOME STORY! _

That was so incredibly good! I like it i like it. Magnifiqueo!

Tee-hee, Kaiba never changes! He is such a meanie! *shakes fist*

Kaiba: *grins coldly*

Kiko: o_O *inches away*

Well, anyways, this fic has been SUCH a fantastic read. I can't wait for you to post some more fics!

Ps. I'm coming back with a new fanfic today hopefully!

The end? Woah. Boy do i love this story. Joey was right Kaiba was a bit sadistic. Loved this story so muche. You don't know how much i loved this. You were so great. Thank you for such a wonderful fic.

Wow! That was a great vampire story! I'm glad it had a happy ending.

it started in hate

then began with a boy

and ended in chaos

like the end of the world

it was like a game waiting to be played

with cards and dice and a board for us

it started out easy then it got out of hand

the hearts were our own

and the spades were our knife

the clovers were our luck

the diamonds were our mind

the numbers were minutes

the dice were our ages

and the board was our kind

and the people were endless

he said we couldn't win

but i never gave up

they wanted our souls and our lifes blood

we chose not to give it and now I'm right here

writing cursed poetry in my squeaky chair.

this idea came to me when i read the forbidden game trilogy and i finished it when i read you masterpiece. it was fate or the writing i did just mixed well with you story. your story rocks no matter what anyone else says .so write on! ( please finish. ) i have read this 32 times! and it is still good.

Wow one of the best stories that I've read so far. Please update soon!

mysterious and good. gonna read the rest soon.