Awesome. Excellent. Hit exactly the note I was looking for! At last, my search through is complete!

Yay. I love, love, love this-one of the few Firefly fics I'll read repeatedly. And you did an excellent job with the cummings thing; it would be very easy for that to be awkward or too-much-ish, but you make it fit perfectly and it gives the whole thing a dreamlike quality that complements Simon's state of mind. Wonderful work.

I forgot to review this when I first read it, sorry.

This is so lovely! You create such a wonderful moody atmosphere.

Very poetic. It sticks with you. Well done.