I would like to read the story completely before making a judgment

This is quite interesting.

I love ur story so far and cant wait to see wat happens... I love how u made sere and Dracos relationship I hope there will be more explosions in hogwarts with them... great job and good luck

well this is one of the few good sere/draco bro/sis fics so kep it up kay i like this one

Raine

okay how can i say this, IT SUCKS MAJOR DONKEY BALLS! A WORD OF ADVICE, DON'T EVER TRY TO BECOME A GOOD WRITTER BECAUS WHAT U GOT IS PRETTY CRAPY!

it needs so much work ! make ur chapters longer with more detail. You know how u said she never got a chance to intro duce herself yea after when draco takes her aways comes back and then leaves u've got, for the rest of the train ride they pondered on why draco was so protective of serenity. So how do they know her name ? and not to mention, u can't arrive "on" a train its at a train station. It needs serious work. remember to review all of youre work and SPELLING mistakes are bad to!

This is great. Hope you update soon.

In my other review i ment longer than 2 paragraphs not shorter sry keep it up.

SV

This is preety good,but u should make the paragraphs alot chapter should have been shorter that 2 paragraphs.

SV

I Luv

Your story's cool although you should space it out more. Please update soon!

damn. this was ... well, i don't even know. you need to edit this, there are spelling errors and mispronunciation galore. there are problems with the authenticity of it, most severely Serenity's moth is named Selene. if Serenity is Draco's twin, her mother would be the same as his, and his mother's name is Narcissa. you desperately need to redo this, it has so many mistakes.

Hmm. If Serenity's his twin, and he's a prefect, shouldn't they be in their fifth or sixth year? It's just that you said she'd only spent 3yrs at Durmstrang.

:p Nixi the Pixi

I really like it read my story ok?

I like it and i hope that you are going to continue on this story. This is really good.