You know something? Does Soun have in-laws?

Have they found about the Tendo's treatment of Ranma?

Have the Tendo's one day after they all come back from somewhere that the house has been cleaned of ALL mementos of Mrs Tendo and then they are called by Soun's father in law or brother in law and Soun (most likely) is told what they did.

Soun's in laws tell them that they have no right to remember his wife at all nor do his daughters have the right to remember their mother because of what they put Ranma through they hang up and make the argument short!

How does that idea sound?

Taking away Ranma's curse kind of makes it not Ranma anymore. Merging with Sailor Moon and Ah My Goddess can sort of work, because of overlapping settings. But trying to shoehorn in all these Naruto references really doesn't work. On top of that, there are too many inconsistencies with the Naruto references, and sudden changes in character behavior that aren't set up, explained, or justified. Ranma can barely walk. Ranma can lift a lamp post out of the ground and throw it. The US references also added nothing to the mix. There's an awful lot of setup for things that never happen.

then, Nabiki donated her organs to Ranma, now she is dead ...

the truth had enough potential, but the thing stopped liking me with the added ninja things, in fact I had a lot of potential with the Sailor Senshi, but, simply the thing got out of hand.

I will take the story from chapter 2 and write it in Spanish and my style / style, and I do not need your approval: v

asi que, nabiki dono sus organos a Ranma y ahora viene un capitulo muy sad, donde el se entera que ella se sacrifico para salvarle?

Another ball-less beta male piece of s**t. Jump in a frozen lake and die a**hole.

is this over

Great story, please continue

And done. Stop with the self hate crap and acting like their words were true.

did child died?

Oh God, why? Where's the mind bleach? I need it, now!

I hate you p-chan, fuck you! I hope you get assraped with a fucking cheesegreter and the rest of you whinny bitches that can't do a thing!

Yeah I'm sorry but I gotta bow out.

Too many unnecessary and frankly forced crossovers and the unneeded and disgusting sexual content have sadly ruined something that had great potential.

What a fucked up fic. I tried to read this but stopped. It's a complete mess with crossovers such as Naruto suddenly added in ways that make no sense. Boring and confused.

This story gets very dark but I can't help but need to read more. I do see mistakes in grammar and other minor things all throughout the story but I would have to basically go over and change and highlight everything to be more specific and I am no expert myself. I do feel your writing gets much better as the story progresses and your grasp on the readers heart gets more solid. Please continue. I would love to offer better help but I suck at writing myself so don't really know what to say. Thank you for writing and sharing your story and I hope to see more and the chapters can become truly epic in their length and this would only fuel my hunger for more.

Man I want more, keep it up