Please continue! :) I'm pretty curions what happens next!

I just started reading it, and am looking forward to the next chapter. I don't see a lot of similarities to Baldur's Gate games, other than the drows, at least to the games on PS2. No matter, I still really like it. My thought is that this has the potential for being a great original story, if you just tweaked it a little.

BTW, congrats on your baby.

Sorry I forgot to add in my pervious review,

Congratulations on your new baby boy!

WooHoo, a new chapter!

I was beginning to think this story was discontinued.

Please don't take so long with the next update.

Just found your story, so I won't complain about the update delay. The story moves along at quite a fast pace, which lends a feeling of urgency to it.

I'm curious to see where it goes and just what Moira will have to say (if they escape the bandits).

Great Job! I really like this story. Please, please continue.

Hmm.. the battle scene was somewhat sparse, but I can understand that. It can be difficult to create a coherent action sequence. What I did like was the fact that the characters are skilled, able to defend themselves and not "walking gods of destruction" like I've seen in so many other works. Kudos on that point.

Corinne and Siobhan are well thought out. You seem to have a strong idea of who the two are and what path you what them to take. The others... well... they seem to be more reaction based. What I mean is they seem to be able to only respond to situations. This one gets angry, this one gets upset... I'm sure you've got something planned for them, but for now I'll just watch them chirp out a the occasional reply to a development. To close, I'm not sure how I feel about Ruarc as a romantic interest. I'm fairly certain that Siobhan won't be happy about it. Keep writing, it's got the potentcial to be a story that you, as an author, can be satisfied with.

damn cliffs

A interesting bit of literature, drwing in its early phases. I am interested at how the story will turn out. Excellent character description, and your writing style is understood well. Nothing wrong with the story right now. I hope you will continue writing.

Generally speaking, I don't read stories told in the first person perspective.
So far, I like what I've read. No helpful criticisms for now, please continue the story.