Reviews for Oblivious
Kkk chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
Nice
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
He...smiled? SMILED? You built it up to him smiling? Great story but the end? A bit of a let down
flawsmadebeautiful chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Very sweet. I liked it a lot.
Amanda chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
lol i love that thing you do before the story!-i like your story to! .
Chit Chit chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
OMG OMG...this is juz so SWEET...everything is brilliant!

CcTw0
corny sloth chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
This is brilliant!

Keep up the good work! ]]
Telemachos chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
...Cute. Although I'm not too satisfied with the ending...you left out anything that happened/might have happened with Alex, and you didn't really resolve the thing at the end. But otherwise, it was really good. :D
Kristen chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
That was REALLY well-written. I liked how you described things and the flow of the story went nicely. Great job!
spix chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
It was good, but i think it ended to quickly. you should of finsihed the scene at the end.
FallenMystery chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
aw, you should have continued a little longer! loved it!

FM
ShIvErInG sMiLe chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
that was perfect, you know? The last lines especially. Just a smile. How cute and realistic.
Mrs. Phineas Nigellus chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Wow, that was really good! I almost find it hard to believe it was a one-shot. Are you sure you don't want to write more? *puppy-dog eyes*

*The MRS*
BookwormRose chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Wonderful, I loved it, very very realistic...
Jersey Princess chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
Aww! That was lovely!

~Jayxx
emmiline chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
Sweet
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