| Reviews for Oblivious |
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Kkk chapter 1 . 8/23/2015 Nice |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2014 He...smiled? SMILED? You built it up to him smiling? Great story but the end? A bit of a let down |
flawsmadebeautiful chapter 1 . 8/8/2011 Very sweet. I liked it a lot. |
Amanda chapter 1 . 4/16/2011 lol i love that thing you do before the story!-i like your story to! . |
Chit Chit chapter 1 . 3/21/2007 OMG OMG...this is juz so SWEET...everything is brilliant! CcTw0 |
corny sloth chapter 1 . 2/23/2007 This is brilliant! Keep up the good work! ]] |
Telemachos chapter 1 . 12/20/2006 ...Cute. Although I'm not too satisfied with the ending...you left out anything that happened/might have happened with Alex, and you didn't really resolve the thing at the end. But otherwise, it was really good. :D |
Kristen chapter 1 . 9/3/2006 That was REALLY well-written. I liked how you described things and the flow of the story went nicely. Great job! |
spix chapter 1 . 6/3/2006 It was good, but i think it ended to quickly. you should of finsihed the scene at the end. |
FallenMystery chapter 1 . 6/1/2006 aw, you should have continued a little longer! loved it! FM |
ShIvErInG sMiLe chapter 1 . 2/28/2006 that was perfect, you know? The last lines especially. Just a smile. How cute and realistic. |
Mrs. Phineas Nigellus chapter 1 . 2/14/2006 Wow, that was really good! I almost find it hard to believe it was a one-shot. Are you sure you don't want to write more? *puppy-dog eyes* *The MRS* |
BookwormRose chapter 1 . 11/30/2005 Wonderful, I loved it, very very realistic... |
Jersey Princess chapter 1 . 12/11/2004 Aww! That was lovely! ~Jayxx |
emmiline chapter 1 . 5/23/2004 Sweet |