This is really good.

Hey, this is without a doubt one of the most detailed, enthralling and saddening works around Seifer I've ever read. You mix erotic, senuous desire with guilt and despair as though they go naturally hand in hand! My only wish is that there was more, that you could have detailed Seifer's whole "prediciment" further, until he breaks down at the end of Disk 3. I've got a work with a similar theme to this, but christ, I really admire you for writing this.

Not only is Ultimecia excellent at manipulating Seifer emotionally and physically, which your work addresses, I love it that you make it clear that she enjoys whats shes doing. That sliver of affection she may or may not have had for Seifer is constantly at odds with the ruthlesses and bitter Sorceress which she claims the World made her.

Well done. Hopefully you'll write some more someday!

that was really good... you must've written this a long time ago, but i dont' care if my review's a little late... still welcome, right?

anyway, just wanted to say that you did a really good job and i praise you for it. )

Wow...very good. I never really read any Seifer/Edea stories before. Really good.

That was definitely intense. The thought of Edea and Seifer being intimate is so wrong, but in truth, it very well coulda happened. Especially since Ultemicia was controlling Edea. I mean, who wouldn't want a piece of Seifer?

This is really great, everything you write has such depth and It really turned into something more. I also have the best inspiration late at night and when my mind begs for sleep, it's weird, like dreaming awake. It really shows possibilities for Seifer and I feel like you captured his soul well. But anyway, great job!
-FW-

This is pretty good. Very poetic!

I'm not really a fan of theories like Ultimecia abusing Seifer sexually. I just think all she did was use him as a soldier and nothing else. I just never saw any evidence in the game to believe otherwise.

Man, I'm the last person you'd want CC from! HAHHA! -
But just so you know, I enjoyed reading the whole thing, and I think a lot of things are good...so.
It's was pretty much amazing.

Hiya, gurl. I liked this! With all the stuff you've been working on story-wise, this was the last thing I expected you to do! Kinda gives ya a break from all the other stuff for a while.
Anyway, you made me want to claw Ultimecia's eyeballs out. *goes off to 'comfort' Seifer*