Reviews for You Look Marvelous
Stacy20 chapter 8 . 10/27/2014
I would like to read that pwp chapter with a lemon. I enjoyed reading this alot regardless of some and few grammar mistakes the story had: overall, it was good :3
Kakamashi7 chapter 8 . 8/29/2010
I really loved this story. I think Kotei was such a creepy stalker. He's even worse than the pizza guy from Foamy the Squirrel. I really think you should make the next chapter, along with the lemon of course. But Seto NEEDS to be Uke in this story, but with Jou this time. *Shivers from wierdo's humping session with Seto*

That was so wierd, but still good.

Please write more UkeSeto Puppyshipping. Please?
Mashy-Gaara4life chapter 8 . 2/3/2010
Reading your Seto stalkers story made me high. I dono why but lately I'm lusting over Seto Kaiba even though I know he's just an anime chara.
krazylicious chapter 8 . 7/11/2008
yes, i want the lemon. i alos wants to have a date scene. the story is great and sexy.
Haley chapter 8 . 6/16/2006
I read alot of Yu-Gi-Oh FanFiction and so far your FanFics have been the best.

Though it would finish this Story off nicely with another chapter with a Lemon as you suggested.

Cheers
FanFicFanGurl101 chapter 8 . 1/16/2006
i like it...i like it a lot... so please add a lemon!
unstoppableshadow chapter 8 . 10/16/2005
please write a lemon between the two I love setoXjoey and this story is perfect!
SKLVR chapter 8 . 10/3/2005
Wow, I am glad I stumbled on this story again. I read it who knows how long ago and apparently neglected to review for which I apologize. I confess my derangedness in liking Kaiba tied up and taken against his will, but I think your variation is even more twisted. I mean there's no REAL damage done by Keito humping Kaiba, but the psychological effects would be pretty bad. That's an image that really stuck with me unlike however many other bad things I've read about being done to Kaiba that may blend together. Kaiba's just an object, it doesn't seem to matter if it's the real thing or a plushie. I guess that's part of what obsession is all about, you have this image and it doesn't really matter if the real thing is different, you're going to have it your perfect way. Very twisted. I wish there was more to this story, though I can't say this story is lacking. I guess I'm just always ready for more Kaiba angst. :) I hope you will keep on writing, you do a great job knocking some of the arrogance out of Kaiba. ;)
BlueEyesjammys15 chapter 8 . 7/26/2005
Puh-leez do a follow up with a lemon! This was the best story evah! Great job! _
Heavenly Moments chapter 8 . 1/29/2005
Woah, ok.. I read all those chapters in one sitting. That was an interesting story. The stalker guy was a total sick perverted weirdo. gah! Glad they are all ok. I liked the uniqueness to this story. ;)
Cristy chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
It's ..

hand me the world on a silver platter

and what good would it be

with no one to share, no one who truly cares for me ...

kk? makes more sense, doesn't it?

o.
krystalithium chapter 8 . 9/14/2004
Very good!A PWP chapter would be nice!
kiokukaiba chapter 8 . 9/14/2004
Oh! I red the whole thing in about an hour and a half! I loved it! YOU MUST WRITE A LEMON! I loved this story! 10/10!
Denisse chapter 7 . 9/14/2004
JUST PERFECT! THIS IS SO MUCH BETER THAN KISS MY HAND AT MY COMAND, because here, you can see more feelings.

Please, keep writing, your style is almost perfect.

I really love all your Fics
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