AH AH AH! SO GEWD!

yah, chapter 2!

Honestly, I love KOS to death, but I really really like what you're doing with Shion and Chaos. Keep it up!

Can't wait to read more.

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Hey its been a while but you have your reasons. Hope to see another update soon.

wo Someone who's willing to write a ShionXchaos fic! I totally think there's evidence in the game for that, despite what you said in your notes. Throughout the game, chaos is always the one to comfort Shion and make sure she's okay. Granted, there may be some other reason for this, but the consistancy of his actions provides more evidence for ShionXchaos then chaosXKos-Mos, since there was really only one scene and a little line afterwards supposrting the later couple. Good job on your choice of couples, even if you're just experimenting _

Interesting story. Id like to see where it goes in later chapters.

OMG! I have written a (implied) Shion/chaos as well! The couple was so obvious to me -;;..I can see chaos/KOS-MOS though..::sigh::
I haven't posted mine though..I can't get it to do the italics and I'm trying to work it out
Thank you so much for writing one of these, and I can't wait to read more!
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Wow. This is pretty good.
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The dialogue is natural, the descriptions flow nicely, the characters are in-character... everything's fine; I see no grammatical or punctuation errors. I'd point them out, but my computer glitched on me, my original review didn't go through, and I'm too lazy to find them again. ;
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Oh, and this is on my favorite stories list now, if you want to know. Please update soon.