Your poem moved me. I had the same thoughts pan had when my girlfriend broke up with me. It seems that being together 8 years meant nothing to her at all.

That was another good poem that I have read today. I liked it and it did kinda sounded like another one of my poems

I've never liked DBZ or anything to do with it but after I admitted my own feelings to someone and they told me in so many words to piss off, I read this poem and it helps. Thank you. I get a recovery poem and you get my life story (what's wrong with this picture?). Thanks again.

pretty good poem. I like the emotions behind it. It's so sad that Pan is so alone. Great job of capturig those feelings so well. great job. Laters.

That was good! Very sad though...