Please don't do it from another person's POV - really confused me!

YESSSSS OH MY GOSH I LITERALLY LOVE WILL!

WILL
WILLWILL!
PLEASE WILL!

chapter 20 qustion and answers

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!

i've reviewed before but i really want to read the rest of the story.

I know you're probably busy, but I want to see the part where he proposes.

And this cliffhanger is driving me insane!

so please please please please please updatee!

it will make my day! :]

Hey! so are you going to update ur story?

because im lovin them. :]

btw, im from cali too. and my school color is black red and whitee. lol.

Why? l think this story is great! why don't you keep writing, we haven't seen the part where Will proposes to Riley, have we? And l'm so anxious to read it! Please, give it another try, it will absolutely turn out to be fabulous, believe me!~!

Pinery

please continue to write. love the story.

HEY RILEY! I'm re-reading your revised version of England. I bet you had a fabulous time there! We'll have to compare favorite places and stuff. Update the revised version soon!

As Always,

Lady Emma

Hi Riley,

I'm Holly, from lol Pope Valley california (north central)I found your lovely story just yesterday, and I've read it non-stop. Believe me I was up until 1:30 am last night. I don't know yet if you've gone and made any of your revisions. But I really like it the way it is. I know threw several of your chapters you asked for ideas... I'm full of them because i can't get the damn story out of my head. I'm using it as a cover to not think of my boyfriend who's in the hospital and out of state at the moment.

So, I was wondering how riley (character) was going to be able to balance school, will and princess pratice. Will would odviously help. Another angle is that you have left open part of the story of who has been ransacking R. lately.. you could possibly incorpurate that back into the story after she leaves the weekend get-away. I could deffantly see julie being the myster pez theif. She didn't show up too long after the second ransacking anyway. Collin is another possible theif, she did walk past him before she went into her room. Or a sinister colaberation between the two. plot to get from them to get the thrown or is that just too romantic novel style? Anyway if julie and collin where ploting something evil, more ransacking and threats could get worse a kidnapping or something. Julie living with rilys could deffantly use this vantage point here to implictae Will, who is off ringshoping and will not give Riley his aliby.

The why Dash doesn't want R&W together could be another total story line twist possiblity. You made it kinda of seam that will was hiding something in that sceen, Madison could help bring to light this info.

You've left the Zach story line open and these last two chapters I have rarely seen Madison? And the lingering fact that rilys has yet to talk to her parents, she's been hurt (it was in the news) and her parents or at least her mother hasn't shown up in england or left numerous emails and phone messages for her? ... hmm well if you need more plot or story turn possiblities I'll be here.. I've sent the last two day engorging myself in fanfic, I'm almost tempted to eather start photoshoping my favorite caracters or start a fan fic of my own, very inspiring stuff you've got here. Keep up the good work, and don't revise tomuch it's fine the way it is ! Good luck !

Hi

It was a great story, Id liked it from the first page. This was my first fanfiction-story. id hope you finish it soon, I cant wait to read more

Love Lina

don't stop now! keep on writing!

OMG! IT LIVES! You updated! You actually updated! I though you had DIED! Its about bloody time! _ I luv the new chapter! KEEP UPDATING!

hey wassup!

well i really like ur story and i added to one of my favorite! :

So cute! Oh what a cute chapter! I can't wait till the "princess lessons" That'll be interesting! Update again soon Riley!

As Always,

-Royally_fanatic_1

(AKA. Used to be Lady Emma)