Yo, dude, you've gotta upload the rest of the fic that's on your site over here on FFN! Please, I really wanna see the oh-so epic battle between Darkmark and King Harkinian, but with the convenience of having it here, on this site. That way, I can have my daily reminder of how horrible humans are and how pure every yoshi in existence is every day of my life. Oh, and I especially wanna see the fated meeting between Darkmark and Sexytina again. Makes me cry, that scene does. Especially when they randomly engaged in fleshy desires in full view of everyone like the kinky buggers they are. Oh, and that random rapist who appears right at the end for his redemption arc against Captain Dragonslayer. Oh, jesus, and my favorite scene, the one where Darkmarkus meets his old loves in not-Heaven and then gets rejected immediately to no fanfare, even though I've waited over a decade to see them reconcile and make each other smile again, or at least butt heads, or anything that wasn't just 'Huh, you're not Marcus, piss off', goddaMN IT, SHIALA AND ALZIANA, YOU MOTHERMATERS, WHAT THE HELL, WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME.

Seriously though, fic's fun. Especially when Darkus becomes an edgelord. So I wanna see it finished, if you please! If not, that's cool too. It's easy enough to find the rest of Lord of the Octagrams on your site (wink, wink, nudge, nudge, nose tap, nose tap, hint hint, readers).

*Leaves to Infinite's theme from Sonic Forces, which may as well be Darkmark's theme*

Does it reminds me of the Yoshi versions of the Legend of Zelds series?

I just love Manny! He is such a stalker! Reminds me of someone. LOL I admit the thing with Sheila and Marcus was so adorable! [*fangirl scream*]

That was such an intense story. You are an amazing story teller. I'm still loving this so far!

Aww, man. Now Laen is g-gone! This is too much for goodness sake. I'm still liken this fic! :)

This made me cry. It was THAT bad. T_T Poor Karin! No, poor Manny! This is such an intense fic!

"Ferals are stereotypically fruit-loving, extremely impatient, overactive Yoshies. We’d better keep this disguise up well.”

Yep, that is the stereotype of Yoshis! LOL I found this chapter quite humorous, especially towards the end when Marcus cursed in fluent English! LOL

I came across this fic while looking through the Yoshi fics and this fic was definitly worth the search. I am still reading this, but let me tell you: this fic is awesome! I love the fantasy aspect of this fic and it is EXTREMELY well written. I will continue to read it during my spare time and I will ocasionally leave a review when I find something of interest.

[I hope you still check out fanfic, because this fic is pretty old!]

I really love this story!

20/20

*Tries to make this rise from the ashes with a comment*

You said yourself...

"I will finish this, though! I swear! I will see it through to the conclusion!"

So... make good on your word. Finish it. I know, I have not left a review on this particular story before... but it's good, and I for one would love to see it completed.

Don't give up on a good idea. Don't deny yourself the ending.

And remember- the destination is unimportant. It's all in the journey that gets you there.

-Zero9g9

Awesome story. The way you fitted gods and religious tones in with the action and romance struck me awesomely. I can't wait for the conclusion. DARKMARK FOREVER ;

Wow. This is seriously one awesome story. It's full of action, adventure, romance, death, and despair. Everything I'd want from a story. I'm so happy that I decided to read this story! I look forward reading this story through to the end! Congratulations on the awesome story, and PLEASE update soon!

Holy cow, the bestest story ever isn't dead anymore, yay!

Nice to finally see an update! The chapter was worth the wait as well! It will definitely be interesting if Manny and Xenly are able produce a child. Who knows what could happen in the future if that were to occur. Update soon!

This is the best "Mario" fanfic in the entire category. It's really inspiring. I hope you update soon; it's been five months since you updated.

I'm supposing that Darkmark will never return back to Marcus or have his friends resurrected.

By the way, instead of putting a "Read and find out" summary, you might want to explain what this story is about. Not as many people will read it if they don't know what to expect.