I loved it. I love them. I love the 'spar', and even how InuYasha 'understands' what's going on with them. I just love them together.

I don't think it is to long for a one-shotter.

It's hard to find good stories with this paring, and this is a great story.

Nice. Very nice - and fluffy, too! _ Good job! I really liked it a lot... just one question - are you planning on writing more IY fanfic? (not necessarily more chapters or anything like that)

Aww, thats one of the best Miroku/Sango's I've ever read. I'm drowning in all the fluff!
Really origional (How in the world do you spell that stupid word?), love how it put together.
I think they need to make more M/S fics, really. They're a cute couple, and you are a great way to help prove the point furthermore.
Like how you kept everyone in char., and how you bring up the whole "were not birds, were humans, and our wings can be mended" (just not in those words) thing. That really helps the overall fluff (which I'm still drowning in)... o.o Wait! Im still drowning in the fluff? That means I havent taken a breath this whole time! Im gonna die if I dont! *takes a deep breath... and chokes on the fluff* X_x

Excellent job!
I've been reading a lot of these stories lately where Miroku breaks or nearly breaks Sango's heart and he sincerely doesn't mean to.
I also like how you twisted the norm around where Miroku actually acts normal instead of a pervert.
I must admit I have two favorites in this fic:
1)Sango vs. Miroku. And Miroku wins! I always wondered if they got into a fight, who would win? Now I know! But only because Miroku was kinda sneaky.
2)Sango and Miroku's intimacy. Miroku started his heartwrenching lines.
Once again, excellent job! I love it! And I love how the title fits in with the story also!

BRAVO! excellent with the fluffiness. i love mirsan fics, especially the fluffy 1s, so great work!

Great story & Perfect Ending. Posted in the top 5 one-shotters I've read so far for this couple. You kept them in character but the role reversal was ingenious (hope that's spelled correctly). Keep em' coming.

...Wow, that may be one of the best mir/san one shots out there

Aw...
Had to say it. You captured the two of them so well - I was all choked up at the end. The Inuyasha moment was very cute - he made sure that he was watching out for them without anyone else knowing that he cared.
Wonderful story - keep those monster one-shots coming!

Wow. That was wonderful! It was well developed, interesting, and very believable. Although their not in their usual roles, as you said, both Miroku and Sango were very much in character. Good job!

Hope you write more soon! This story was refreshing. Ja ne!