| Reviews for Wounds Too Deep To Heal |
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  Karen chapter 4 . 2/2/2015 cant wait for thr next chap! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/6/2015 write more! |
 FallenTruth chapter 4 . 6/30/2005 YES GO AMA! KILL THE MEAN ORCS! ::ahem:: Sorry got a bit carried away. I like your story, but my fav character has to be Kendra. She seems so young and like she is recovering fine, but I get the feeling that she isn't. It might just be my imagination, but I think she is just hiding how scared she really is. Ama killed the mean orc and I am so happy!She got him and he deserved it! Aiva seems nice, but a bit bossy and know it al. I still like her all characters should have flaws like that. I really hope you will update soon, but KENDRA IS THE BEST! Of the LOTR Characters I LOVE LEGOLAS. That is all I have to say on that subject, because it is obvious why he is the best is it not? Anyway write more soon! |
| cookiesandcream chapter 4 . 7/15/2004 omg amazing great good fabulose im stunned WRITE MORE PLEASe |
| legolover12 chapter 1 . 7/15/2004 omg please keep writing please i love this story! |
| THECheeseTurkey chapter 4 . 7/2/2004 I just relized that i didn't review this chapter for some reason. (gasp) evil orcs attack! so did you get 3 reviews yet? Cause it want more soon! |
| Macandcheese chapter 4 . 6/26/2004 omg that was soo good please write more and soon *macandcheese* |
| misscam chapter 1 . 6/25/2004 Minor problem with your use of rape in the first chapter - Tolkien wrote that Elves who are raped *die*. They just give up their body and their spirit go to the Halls of Mandos in Valinor (as Elves do not truly die) and do not return to Middle-earth. There's a few other things you might want to consider as well. The original characters don't have Elven names as Elves would; in Middle-earth no one would say 'slut'; Legolas actually means 'Greenleaf', it isn't a last name; and after the destruction of the Ring, Aragorn was called 'Elessar'. On the bright side, your spelling is okay and you have obviously done some research before starting writing. I commend you for that. |
| Miriellar chapter 4 . 6/22/2004 Oh WOW- wow- this is brilliant. YAY- you have no idea how happy I was to see your alert in my mail box- this is that good! I was so glad to see Ama give in Legolas- it was nice but not overly girlish- you know what I mean. Very angsty- loving that. And go her- she killed an orc. Update soon! ~Miriellar |
| plead just to no chapter 4 . 6/21/2004 you have a good storie going continue |
| krazy monkey chapter 4 . 6/21/2004 i will reveiw over and over again if need be this is an amazing story ur a great writer keep writing |
| krazy monkey chapter 3 . 6/20/2004 this is a kick ass story write more |
| THECheeseTurkey chapter 3 . 6/20/2004 (waves) hi! i'm glad you updated! (clicks the ass to favorites list box) poor Ama. she seems so scared even thought she tried so hide it. Kendra is funny pestering Legolas! |
| smallfry chapter 2 . 6/18/2004 pwease wright more! |
| Miriellar chapter 2 . 6/8/2004 oh, this is good- very good. what a start. But why haven't you updated girl? This is...well...it's fab. I really like what you've done with the characters. Please update soon! ~Miriellar |
