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very nice. Is Ryuurin gonna get any other shirei? And what about the Kirin for Hou?

OMG! This is a good fic! UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

PLZ UPDATE! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

This is great! Please write more!

PLEASE!

Ryuurin is adorable!

Hopefully, they can reach En safely.

I hope someone rescued Ryuurin soon. Hopefully, it's Youko.

You need to update! I LoVE the Twelve Kingdoms, and I love your story. Your writing style is nice, kind of reminds me of my best friend's style. That's okay though. Sure you may have many typos, but overall this story is excellent.

HI! I'm loving your writing style and the intersting new story you're weaving for us! I just have one question - why is the Kirin called Ryuurin if she's the new Kirin of Kou? Kirin have to be named after their country I beleive, and males have to be "ki" and females "rin". She would be Kourin just like her predecessor, ne? at least that's what i got from the translations.

Well that's just my helpful observation, but either way, I enjoyed reading this and would love for you to continue!

Yatta! A wonderfully written piece. I can tell by the vocabulary you use that you have paid close attention to the anime.

What a wonderfull story! You have captured the spirt of 12 kingdoms very well and am looking forward to your updates

Whoa! GeneWeiss is impressed by Kouki's outburst. About time a Kirin gotta puts his feet..err.. hoof down about this matter. Compared to the others, Kouki seems to have a little bit of sense comparted to the others. Well, keep on writing! Let's see how Kouki finds his king/queen.

Oh, I liked this chapter! And I liked Lausa a lot - I hope that she is going to be a continuing character. She just really stood out to me.
I continue to be impressed with how well you know canon.

Sorry that it's taken me so long. I won't always be able to read your new chapters right away, but I *will* be reading them (and reviewing in a helpful way, too, hopefully). Funny that you thank me for the proofing help, because I was going to start out by pointing out a couple. :) (I have a tendency toward bad spelling, too, have I told you? It gets better as you become a better self-editor... lots of re-reading.)
"per say" should be "per se"
you said "servants and companies" rather than "companions"
and near the end, there were a lot of "ed"s... words missing?
I was thinking that you might have missed those because you were as excited writing that end scene as I was reading it. I hadn't expected that character's appearance! WAI! I've been very impressed with your almost all-original cast, and as much as I like cameos of characters that we know, so far the story hasn't been lacking.
Now, onto the next chapter.

wow :) i really liked that chap! hopefully kouki will be consoled by somebody who can understand his problems. im looking forward to seeing keiki and youko in this fic as you said in your rambles
i can understand koukis outburst and i hope the woman will be sorry for what she did.
did kouki visit kou often in the past in your story?
i still cant wait for ryuurin to speak her first words! im sure that she and kouki would grow very attached to each other were kouki to remain at mt. hou sometime longer!
and hopefully the little kirin will not get in any troubles as she stays on her desired way :)
cant wait for the next chapter ;)
byebye Trin