This was a really nice read, I enjoyed it! Especially liked the darker parts and the mystery stuff.
I can't relate to desperately-in-love-Atemu that much, but I guess it kinda fits when thinking about how young he was.
So, if you're still writing this, I'd be curious for the next chapter

Pleasee please please please please please please update again! I love this story and I wanna read more so please update!

Oh, wow. So this is the reason everyone hooks these two up. It's a lot of charisma to work with. I'm glad a stranger recced this. -

OMC, you need to update this! I love this story! It's amazing! Please! Keep writing and update soon~!

Beautiful story...please continue! I look forward to reading more about Seth and Atem (and returning to Seto and Yami). The character development in this story has been amazing, and the angst just heartbreaking and beautiful. Since I really like Seto Kaiba, I am enjoying seeing his transformation from bastard to reluctantly concerned/interested, and this fic in particular has made me much more interested in Yami than I have been previously. Btw, reading your story works well while listening to Evanescence music :)

I love the flashbacks! I don't find them boring or predictable at all (ok, maybe a little predictable, but in a good way)...amazing fic!

I just found this story and was hooked from the start! I like that you are separating the relationships and showing that they are not the same people in the present as they were in the past. Awesome job, excellent writing style. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update!

I stumbled upon this story and I like it a lot. I'm sorry to hear about your mother and the other hardships in your life, but I hope you continue with this story. And that things will look up for you soon.

Awesome! This is what I have been waiting for! Thank you very much for updating.

And I look forward to the new chapter. Gambatte ne!

Oh wow, thought I had commented on this already. The story is certainly becoming more intense. I'm really excited to find out exactly it is Atem has in store. I was wondering if there was any significance in Seth referring to him as Yami instead of Atem. Is it to show that he is still dreaming or something like that? Looking forward to the next one!

I am so very very sorry for your loss. A lot has happened over the years. If you ever need anything please by all means send me a message. Your creativity never ceases to amaze me, you are a far stronger person than I. I can see the way your life has shaped your mind over the years through the words you write in each chapter. It has shaped your writing process and while you may feel a bit jumbled at times - you do a great job.

Please never give this up, it is one of your many gifts..

This is a great story. I can't wait to read more.

Please, update soon,

The Swordsman

fantastic kaiba is such a bastard in this plz update x

only 3 chapters left huh this is going to be great i can tell i wonder what your going to do next!

till next time...

Yay! Again, glad to have you back. I really like this story, so I've always wanted it to continue. So is Yami planning on using that spell on Kaiba? Or maybe he did it on Seth? This fic is certainly heading in an interesting direction, so I'm excited to see exactly what you do.