Why exactly didn't Draco just get his inheritance? This makes no fucking sense.

won't you finish it?

i had loved this story until i read the last chapter. i guess i forgot that how fcked up things can get. I got so used to reading happy endings and whatnot that this story really made me mad. I'm not sure why you made it so but then again it is your story. It seems more like you gave up on this story and chose to make a simpler ending. I cant get mad at you but i really do hope that you can perhaps rethink this story through. I cant believe how naive harry is made out to be..and how cruel draco is.

i'm kinda disappointed in this story. i was hoping it be unique in that while draco becomes a good guy, he still stays a bad guy as well. extracting revenge for his parents and himself, on ppl like the traitorous "family friend" snape, and the ministry etc.

instead the story just kinda becomes a common as mud ffnet draco changes story.

well, least it had far fewer mistakes in it than many of the others do.

you are so evil to leave it this way. are you ever thinking about finishing it? i hope so!

nice. will read more later.

this is good. will read more later.

Okay... still crying, and it's been, what, three HOURS since I finished chapter 12? I so want to flame this but it's so beautifully written that I can't bring myself to do it. Every word, every sentence of that last scene, another tear, but I held out, thinking that it was, like, Lucius Polyjuiced as Draco. When I reached the bottom of my screen with the arrow keys, just when Draco started on the Astronomy Tower Incident, I realized it was hopeless. I love it! I love the story... but I hate the ending. :'(. Crying harder...

I liked this. The story was quite good, and the writing itself was great. I'm just not sure about Harry and Draco's relationship.

Of course, it's hard for any writer to make a relationship between Harry and Draco believable, but I can honestly say this is the first fic I have read that makes a "relationship" between them completely unfathomable. I couldn't see a relationship between them working during the story, or seeing them get close, but of course the end justifies the means, so to say.

I liked it. Let's just leave it at that. Not happy about the death, but good work.

The story itself was good, but I'm very angry with your lack of warning. Character death and unhappy endings are fine, but not putting a warning in your story's summary is very upsetting. To be brutally honest, I regret reading this fic because of it.

Oh my goodness. I have to say that this is easily the most stunning story I have ever read on , and better then some published works I have read.

I am a huge fan of H/D slash, thought it irks me to know that it could never really happen. But your story just made it real! It's all so very cannon. I love it. I would seriously recommend this story to everyone.

You rock.

~Snake

Thats not the end! Ha... ha... it cant be! I know, Draco is just 'pretending' to be killing him.. and and then.. he'll kill Voldermort instead! yeah and then they live happily ever after.. ha... right? I mean... isnt thats whats really going to happen!

WA WHY WHY WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE!

*ahem* *cough* that was a sad and really good story... it made me cry :(

*adds to fave. story list*

ok let me just say your 'surprise' sucked shit. if i ha known that was the prize i woulnt hav rea this crap. its just horrible. but it was a nice story til then.

Holy crap, Tali! Hopefully you remember me enough to remember that I hate slash, usually.. well.. this story is awesome. I honestly almost cried at the end. This story depresses me horribly. I can only hope stupidly that Draco was under the Imperius Curse.

Very good story so far! I'll have to finish the rest later. Gotta go! )