You should have posted a notice in the synopsis section, or taken this story down if you weren't going to keep it up. I thought it would be a one-shot. So I read it then... Nothing. I understand your reasons for dropping the story... But just leaving it like this is not nice. At least put a notice where people can see it BEFORE they read it and get into something. I only found out that you dropped it because I wandered into your reviews confused. I'm not trying to be mean here. It's just not right to post this and not warn people in the future that it will remain unfinished... At the very least: you should have pulled it down all together. Anyway, it seemed fairly good, and was very well written. I was disappointed to realize it had been dropped though. It's a shame. Not many good zoid fics around.

This is such a good story already! I would really really like to read more :D please continue and update soon :D

Please have the heart to continue! It's very good and has so much potential in it. Please continue it!

Plz continue I would like to see where this is going :D

Nice, beautiful. This is one of the few zoids fanfics I find worth reviewing. You have a nice theme going on here and I see a bright future for this fanfiction. I truly wish you would finish this fanfic. I'm DYING to see what happens hext.

It's really interresting and draws you in. Please update it soon.

Very well writen story you have here. I wish that you will continue to write it though, seem a bit long, and you haven't update it yet. PLease update soon.

hello stupid, what you up to now, are you going to let your viewers down. you are just a kid who can't stand up for yourself. that aren't your real friend. see just because of your words your not writting, alot of people have been writting to shout at you on the internet kid. have some shame and stand up for yourself. and show us you can finish this story with our your friends saying shit around you. friends are there to help you and give advice not to pull you down. stand up and show us we're wrong. you're not a coward kid. and you're not a kid.

liz

all your friends in sarasota think your a good great writer don't stop if you do you would have lost a great talent .

carly

Aw, please continue! I know you said you weren't going to, but please! Just think about it. Because this fic looks so good! And who cares how her name is spelled? My God, people act like the world's coming to an end just because a character's name is spelled different. *gasp!* I know, HUGE deal. And anyway, "Rhyss" is a cooler way to spell her name than "Reese". That reminds me of Reese's peanut butter cups. LOL XD

But anywho...back to the point. You gotta continue! I mean, well, if you really don't want to or you're just not really into Zoids anymore, then I understand. I get that way alot, too, with my fics. But if you're only not continuing it cuz your friends and family members tease you, then you should definitely reconsider. I mean, who cares what they think? I guess you do, but you shouldn't! They're just jealous because they know you have writing talent and they don't! People are like that, ya know? I mean, they don't really do it on purpose, but subconsciously, people always tend to dislike people who can do things that they can't. Really, that's a shame that you're not going to continue writing just because of people like that. I mean, I know they're your friends and family members, but still...you have great talent and if you let what they say keep you from using this talent given to you, you might regret it one day. Maybe you can write in secret... So no one will find out and they won't tease you about it. _ OK, well, I hope you think about this. Maybe you won't continue this fic, but hopefully, you'll begin to write again. _ See ya!

it's spelled reese. and it was good, please continue.

Ok. So there were a few mistakes. Everyone makes them, everyone has typos. And yes, even those that proof read their work. Bottom line is, this is a good start to a good story that I really believe you should finish. Don't stop because of a few flame reviews. You really shouldn't care what other people think. Write it because you want to and for you. You aren't writing for anyone else. Don't ignore your ideas. You have as much right as the next FanFiction author. Even if only ten percent of the members of FanFiction like your story, you should be thankful for that percentage. In addition, you had more good reviews than bad. Please continue it. Adding to favorites! Good luck!

hey u shouldn't listen to what they say .because of what they say you're not finishing this great story then you're really pethertic. they haven't read it thats' why .if they say those bad things to you should keep writing to prove them they're of them u give up writing this story if next time you have a job and they don't like the job r you going to leave the job u r the person who really should learn to grow writing thats all i can say. and your friends should really get a life.

it's reese, not rhyss and it's
specula, not specular

To all of those who read this story,
I'm sorry, but I will not be continuing this any further due to me being constanly teased and ridiculed at school and at home. I'm sorry if any of my "friends" have offended you in any way, they haven't quite learned how to grow up yet... Again, I'm sorry.