This is really good for your first Good Omens fic. There aren't enough of tehm out there.

FINALLY; someone who isn't disgustingly republican and willing to support an issue!

John Lennon! ROFL! (Literally!)

The Lennon reference is a bit of distinctly Pratchett-Gaimenish humor. And I always enjoy a good jab at politics. The "wing rub" idea also gave me a nice warm fuzzy feeling, without being altogether out of character.

Cute. Very cute.

This was really good. I love the unique blending of Pratchett and Gaiman's humor, and you captured it very well. The characters stayed true to the originals, and I must say that I very much enjoyed the jab at the Republicans. (Can you tell that I am not one? _-)
I hope that demon makes you write a few more! _

Gah! My poor eyes/whatever I perceive mental images with! Horrifying middle-aged politician slash aside, it's not bad. The John Lennon reference was quite clever.
(By the way, did you know that John was refering to the fact that Beatles music was embraced far more readily in India than Christianity had been? It doesn't really matter for the story; I just like telling people about that.)

HAHAHA! Great, great, I liked it. Cute and fluffy. Good job!

am conflicted. on one hand, am imagining Johnny Depp as Crowley. on the other - Robin Williams as Aziraphale. hm...

hey im not offended, anything but. the more zira/crowley slash the better! it would be interesting to see u continue this idea...

I am very, very afraid to ask who the two politicians are/were.
This is... cute. Very cute. And Crowley seems all surprisingly fuzzy, without him even realizing it. Aziraphale is more camp than usual, but that's to be expected. And the first two paragraphs - those were very good. I liked those.

Wow, that was so cute! And funny, must not forget funny! "For John Lennon’s sake" is just classic! Love the republicans and the innuendo.