| Reviews for Tense |
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   NerdyPinupCrystal chapter 1 . 7/2/2008 Very very hot! Jack Sparrow can punish me ANYTIME ;-) |
| regretibly gone chapter 1 . 6/5/2007 I've had this exact same fantasy myself! Loved it! You have a very "wicked" imagination! |
| xX .Pirate Queen. Xx chapter 1 . 9/14/2006 I love your story... haha. A-MAZE-ING. Lol. keep up the wicked work! *thumbs up* |
| IBurntTheRum chapter 1 . 8/19/2006 I loved it! I almost laughed out loud when he started spanking her... *fans face* Is it getting hot in here? Anyway... The only thing I can really critisize (sp?) is he says "love" an awful lot. I think it's crossed the line into saying it a little too much... He says it practically every sentence, and that's a bit too often... |
| Ace Von S chapter 1 . 7/19/2006 If that was a punishment. I bet she is gonna misbehave more often. |
| SnakesAllAround chapter 1 . 7/16/2006 haha.. that was a great one. It was original, which you don't see to much of these days. |
| Captain-Ammie chapter 1 . 5/26/2005 Entertaining... |
| The DuTchess of Doom chapter 1 . 4/21/2005 *whipes forehead* *waves with magazine in front of face* steamy luv, very well written and... I love that whip! Love from Holland! The DuTchess of Doom a.k.a. Angela (potcmuppet) |
| Jacksfluzey chapter 1 . 2/7/2005 That was written very well mate! Keep it up! |
| Crawfordness chapter 1 . 1/14/2005 we need a second chapter! |
| misswildfire chapter 1 . 5/15/2004 I thought there were 2 chapter, plz write more soon, loved the story. |
| ijustliketoreadurstory chapter 1 . 4/17/2004 good write more please |
| Rachel Sparrow chapter 1 . 4/16/2004 What happened to chapter 2? I was just getting into the story! Hope you post more soon. |
