oh this story is just too good! _

I really do wish you would continue it!

it's nice to see David in a different light, being a little 'less'

anti-social. but he was pretty mean to Jim-I wanted to smack

him for that. :P

Woops, that Ch2 review was supposed to be for Ch1. Oh well.

Yeah! Take it all of, David! Heh heh... heh. Anyway...

Glad you updated! Great chapter I can not wait till you bring in a 'certain cop' _ Continue soon please!

Love and Hugs

Izzie x

Good story, (I'll mention while I'm here that I'd rather NOT see you make this one full on yaoi...but then again, who cares what I say...?)

Also, you might want to up this one's rating to pg-13 or R, before someone rats you out.

Hey, just read this from the beginning, took me hours, but wow, this is fantastic D

Also, is Laura going to return?

YAY! You added Jim AND Mark! Your story just keeps getting better! Keep up the good work! :-)

Who! What! Who is this mystery lady!

If I spent anymore time telling you how much I love your work, I think I'd die. Which I'm close to at the moment and did quite a bit earlier on Outbreak, with my hand on the V-Poison. And then of course, you went on with my corpse still warm.

...mwhaha

By the way, is David gay! IS HE! AHAHAHA I think I'm slap happy. You should put Ryan in this story. Make him Dave's apprentice and of course, you should quickly kill Brandon, before I have one supremely peesed off cop on my hands.

AHH TOO LATE! HES GOT THE DARTS!

Just when I'd given up. Good new chapter. Sorry I don't have much else to say. That's what happens to me when someone mentions David :)

One last unrelated thing- You had a story up a long time ago called "Through The Skin". You wouldn't happen to still have a copy of it that you'd be willing to give, would you?

Oh yes. More, please.

-S.W.

XD Loved it! Good to see more Outbreak stories. You said you RP? Me too! If ya need some RE:O charas, let me know, I'd love to RP some. *goes to read more Dave fics*

Another spetacular piece of art! _ *In bliss mode after reading it* I beg of you to write more! It's so entertaining to know that there is many people who pick on George in RE: Outbreak, but the character himself is totally oblivious to the torture we place upon him.

Wah! This was great too! I know i've told you loads of times but your really talented! I hope you continue with this (told you that too) i know i seem pushy but this is too good for you not to continue! Excited for the next chapter!

Hugs Izzie x

Are you still working on this story? I hope so.

David's one of my favorite characters in Outbreak, and I just love the way you've kept him away from survival horror situations and given us a peek at his life. Your OC's are also spectacular, they seem like real people and don't steal the attention away from the main characters, which is rare to say the least.

The only suggestion I would make is your author notes are a little long and seem mostly unnecessary. I was disappointed a few times when notified of an update, only to find out that's all it was. I'm not saying this to be mean, so I hope you don't take it that way. I really enjoy your story, in spite of having to do a little skipping around.

I'll be sure to copy down all your fics and read them at the earliest (or latest) convenience. Oh yes, and I'm quite fond of yaoi as well, even if I keep that particular appreciation separate from David. Not that I have anything against the concept of him and Kevin.

Keep up the good work, and hope to see an update from you soon.

-SavageWorlds

that was so hilarious! I love this story and I hope that you update very very soon! David needs to run into lil ol Ryman again and maybe he could help David with his.."problem!" lol!

i like the start! very good, gotta read some more!