Lovely

Nice, very nice! I would love to see more, a lot more if ya know what I mean!

Thanks for the brain food.

Mindy M.

when i first read this story, i was like 'WOW' this is a amazing! and it really is.. i really like the Cath/Sara friendship in it becuase there aren't really many stories with their friendship... so it's awesome! really well written.. and i honestly wish they would have made an ep. about Catherine and Sara's talk but hey, it's too late now.. anyways REALLY well written and it's awesome! it should get an award! keep writing!

Great Story.. :D :D

Fantastic fic,

I love the friendship between them and you pictured it perfectly

THX for sharing that with us

I must say that I truely loved this piece. You captured Catherine and Sara's personalities perfectly. You portrayed them in such a brilliant light despite the situation. I found myself saying "awe" throughout the whole story. I'm glad it's four in the morning and everyone around me is asleep, because otherwise people would think I am a sentimental nut, but this story was sentimental and you did an excellent job with it.

This is very, very good. Solid, in-character, and realistic. A conversation I wish had been shown.

I read some "post-crash and burn" fanfic. This one is really the best in my humble opinion.
You gave us great emotions and really the feeling that they were building a friendship there (being so opened to each others).
GReat dialogues!
BRAVO!

Hi,
I loved this story! You really seem to know the characters and I could picture them having this conversation.
Keep writing! Please!

‘I don’t want anyone else, Catherine. I want her.’
I thought this was very believable, especially the above line - it seemed very "Grissom". Exactly how I could picture Grissom's reasoning, exacltly what I could imagine the reasons behind Catherine's apparent dislike of Sara to be, and exactly how I could imagine Sara feeling.

awesome! u did a great job on this. ur portrayal of S's and C's characters was spot on. i hope to read more of this soon!

Awesome story! It's always nice to see Sara and Cath being friendly. Of course, I loved Grissom's "I don't want anyone else, Catherine. I want her." This was a fantastic post-ep and I hope to see more of your writing soon! :)

Very nice characterization of Cath and Sara. I'd pay good money to see what that scene was all about, but you know we never will. I always have believed that these two really could have a great friendship if they could just break down their walls. Again, great job, especially for a first fic!

This was a GREAT story! You wrote Sara, Cath, and the entire situation/outlook very beautifully. Now, when can I expect more stories from you?

I really enjoyed this story. I like the way that Cath and Sara interact. You have shown both women's vulnerability but not taken away from their strengths (Caths perserverance and Saras intellegence). This is the kind of interaction I always want to see on the programme. I hope you continue writing CSI fan fiction.