This is so greatthat i just cant seem to wait for the next update. Please let it be quick Mr. Ben!

Stop fucking underlining every goddamn word and sentence. It’s annoying and irritating and hard to read

Next chapter please

Next chapter please

I want to see Jessie kissed Ash on his forehead and said "hi, Ash I'm your big sister.

Just realised this fic came out a few months before I was born... wow

interesting. also: for the first four chapters, can you remove the underlines?

more please?!

Wow. this ch great. Eeeep! I really hope Ash and Misty stay loyal to TR. And I really do like the changes they are making in their operations. Just hope, the Boss's plans won't ruin that...

Another awesome ch! Love the 1st ch in book 2! See that is how Team Rocket was always supposed to be: badass top criminal organization! And wow, Delia and Tracey, never would have guessed. So weird, but makes total sense and it's just wow so sad!

And aww, love how at least Misty's other 2 sisters really do love her. That's both sweet and sad.

And awww, c'mon I love Jessie, James, and Meowth, they should have bigger roles! Like the twerps here, but still would love more of the good ol' Team Rocket! Besides that, awesome job! :)

OMG! I LOVE IT! THIS IS SO FREAKIN' AWESOME! IT WAS JUST PERFECT, WOW! I almost wish this could be an anime, it's just wow!

Personally, I do think the twerps deserved what they got for always ruining Team Rocket's plans! lol. Love the back stories u had for them, cause in the anime James, Jessie, and Meowth were the only ones with backstory!

Man, I can just imagine it. So awesome! Finally, a story where I can actually like Ash and Misty! And Tracey was cool here, too. The farewell was definitley sad. Never really liked the twerps cause their such goodie goodies in the anime, but here they are just awesome! Hopefully now they'll understand and respect Team Rocket! :)

And yayyy! I was hoping for this! The twerps and good ol' Team Rocket being on missions together! Again, very fantastic work! Definitley the best Pokemon fanfic ever!

TEAM ROCKET FOREVER!

A lot of this gave me Assassin's Creed vibes.

It's odd, since this story came out before Assassin's Creed, but...

Definitely a good story.

Sadly, it appears to be dead.

I don't know if your still reading reviews for this story, but please finish it! It's too good to be abandoned!

To bad your profile lists this story as abandoned, its a great piece of work.

The humour laced throughout the plot is great and helps keep the story from getting to dark and the references to the pokeverse in general are great with just enough original content added in. I read through the whole thing in one sitting and am sad to see that it will probably never get any closure.

6'0 and 118 pounds? I'm sorry, but that's beyond anorexia. A 6 ft woman weighing 118 pounds would die from malnutrition. Misty should weigh around 148 pounds.

Other than that, this is an excellent story.