Holy crap! What an ending, you really got me with that one. Keep writing great stories.

Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for putting it up.

Simply Beautiful.

Those are all the words needed.

What a twist...I'm amazed

I wish you continued this (modify Keitaro so he never died) but then again there has a lready been a fic with a Blind Keitaro. By the way, why did Keitaro take another test though he had already graduated Tokyo U?

lame

i dont like one shotters and it didnt say that his was a one shotter

This is Jawesome.

I seriously hope you are not a one hit wonder. Your writing skills are far too good. FAR TOO GOOD!

That was great! Too bad Keitaro was dead... But I liked how you added that twist in there.

Great job!

Wow... this is so... indescribable. The way you expressed the character's personalities makes it so that they would not be soon forgotten. Simply one of the best fanfics I've ever read in my life.

So touching and so tragic. A wonderful story, i just wish that you had done more than just a single chapter for it.

um... Nice fic!I like the way you er... shattered Naru's pride.
Am expecting more fics from ya soon!-

I hope you're not just going to be Mr. One-Shot forever, man :\ Your writing is over-worthy of a full length feature _

A very well written one-shot. Well done.

So tragic, yet so well written! A very well done piece of work, very thought out and tear jerking.