Reviews for Teaddy Bear
jdcocoagirl chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
love this story... hope you'll find time to update it. i like how ranma and akane felt comfortable sleeping together.
selena3900 chapter 2 . 6/22/2005
lovely story...how about another chapter or more? :)
KarmaDreamz chapter 2 . 4/9/2005
Is this it? Or is there going to be more? I so Hope so :) I don't know why...but Ranma having a Teddy Bear doesn't sound weird at all,

Byez,

KarmaDreamz
Raver Styx chapter 2 . 1/28/2005
Very good story! Will you continue it?

Please, please, please, please...
JDw9fdjf3efv chapter 2 . 12/25/2004
please please PLEASE! update! this is really really good!
babygurl chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Aw!i loved it you need to continue it or make another one pwes
black-redgirl chapter 2 . 7/25/2004
i really like

I hope their will be chapter 3HEHEHE!

I'm very proud of
jennyroseangel chapter 2 . 6/23/2004
update soon plz
seedees chapter 2 . 6/15/2004
What a sweet fic! You must continue it, i'm waiting for chapter 3!
AngelicFairy chapter 2 . 5/16/2004
Aww kawaii! Do continue! *Maura*
MercuryDestiny chapter 2 . 5/15/2004
Aw! Too Kawaii! *Adds!*
~*~Ami~*~
HitnRunHeretic chapter 2 . 5/15/2004
So cute! I think this is the fluffest, cutest Ranma 1/2 story I have ever read!
HitnRunHeretic chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Aw! That is so cute! I love it, I love it, I LOVE it.
amigoeva chapter 2 . 5/15/2004
Aw... so sweet. Hehe. Anyway, ur Furinkan is spelled correctly, no worries. D
Doctor Emmit Brown chapter 2 . 5/13/2004
I'm glad to see you updated this! Another really sweet piece of fluff. If you havn't noticed, I'm a bit of a romantic, so I quite enjoy this kind of stuff ;)
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One thing I think you need to improve on is your paragraphs. Every time a new person speaks, there needs to be a new paragraph. You forgot this a few times. Oh, and it's spelt "Furinkan" ;)
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Someone commented that the other characters havn't shown up yet. That is a good point. You should have the other fiancees make an appearance soon. Fluff is well and good, but you need to have a bit of conflict now that this is no longer a one-shot fic. I'm guessing that Nabiki stole Rain :D
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I always thought that reviews that helped the author were much better than just "Good job, update soon." I hope this helps, and that the next chapter comes out soon!
-Doc
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