| Reviews for Teaddy Bear |
|---|
jdcocoagirl chapter 2 . 1/25/2009 love this story... hope you'll find time to update it. i like how ranma and akane felt comfortable sleeping together. |
selena3900 chapter 2 . 6/22/2005 lovely story...how about another chapter or more? :) |
KarmaDreamz chapter 2 . 4/9/2005 Is this it? Or is there going to be more? I so Hope so :) I don't know why...but Ranma having a Teddy Bear doesn't sound weird at all, Byez, KarmaDreamz |
Raver Styx chapter 2 . 1/28/2005 Very good story! Will you continue it? Please, please, please, please... |
JDw9fdjf3efv chapter 2 . 12/25/2004 please please PLEASE! update! this is really really good! |
babygurl chapter 1 . 12/19/2004 Aw!i loved it you need to continue it or make another one pwes |
black-redgirl chapter 2 . 7/25/2004 i really like I hope their will be chapter 3HEHEHE! I'm very proud of |
jennyroseangel chapter 2 . 6/23/2004 update soon plz |
seedees chapter 2 . 6/15/2004 What a sweet fic! You must continue it, i'm waiting for chapter 3! |
AngelicFairy chapter 2 . 5/16/2004 Aww kawaii! Do continue! *Maura* |
MercuryDestiny chapter 2 . 5/15/2004 Aw! Too Kawaii! *Adds!* ~*~Ami~*~ |
HitnRunHeretic chapter 2 . 5/15/2004 So cute! I think this is the fluffest, cutest Ranma 1/2 story I have ever read! |
HitnRunHeretic chapter 1 . 5/15/2004 Aw! That is so cute! I love it, I love it, I LOVE it. |
amigoeva chapter 2 . 5/15/2004 Aw... so sweet. Hehe. Anyway, ur Furinkan is spelled correctly, no worries. D |
Doctor Emmit Brown chapter 2 . 5/13/2004 I'm glad to see you updated this! Another really sweet piece of fluff. If you havn't noticed, I'm a bit of a romantic, so I quite enjoy this kind of stuff ;) . One thing I think you need to improve on is your paragraphs. Every time a new person speaks, there needs to be a new paragraph. You forgot this a few times. Oh, and it's spelt "Furinkan" ;) . Someone commented that the other characters havn't shown up yet. That is a good point. You should have the other fiancees make an appearance soon. Fluff is well and good, but you need to have a bit of conflict now that this is no longer a one-shot fic. I'm guessing that Nabiki stole Rain :D . I always thought that reviews that helped the author were much better than just "Good job, update soon." I hope this helps, and that the next chapter comes out soon! -Doc |