Oh my god. I love you! No, not LOVE love, becasue I dont swing that way, but it's totally FINE if people do...*SMACK* anywho, back to what I was saying...you rock! I loved the poem, and I read your bio and LAUGHED MY ASS OFF. You will of course, be getting the bill in the mail, because I damn well needed that. I think you rock as a writer of FF stories, and then to my surprise you do poetry as well. I thought maybe that this had something to do with Phantom of The Opera (you know, masks, masquerade, all that junk) but I am mistaken. *as usual* And just to let you know, I was scrolling around and then all of a sudden, I felt compelled to...stop...right...now. For the life of me I can't tell why...*wanders off* ANYWHO, I need to quit rambling and reading awesome fics at 3:18 in the morning. I will be back, hanging around to see what else knew you come up with. And of course, to collect my damages on the butt-laughing-off fiasco. GOOD DAY! er...morning...ah poop.

coowal and angsty too! yay! i'm gonna review all your stories now! thanks for reviewing my ficcies by the way!

fantastic, fabulous... no wait, fantabulous.

Wow. This is GREAT! I love that lullabye! Its is Very good and it depicts a demon perfectly lol

That was freaking awesome! Ohh, I got the chills. So dark, but I invision it with a merry beat. Keep them coming, Kanpai!

Woah...it updated...err, you updated it. I don't know where you get this stuff (presumably your head), but it is very good. This particular poem is actually quite catchy. Near the end it gets a little unwieldy in a few places (the stanza with the howls and the owls, and the stanza with the whispers dark and the coal black hearts, mostly), but still very nice. If this is what put me to sleep every night I'd be...well, I'm not too sure I'd be all that different than I am now, but it would be an interesting experiment. Though...I'd almost expect the A and S class demons to have different songs than the rest. Whatever.

Excellent imagery in this one, great job.

Hey there. I really enjoyed your poems, especially the third one. I love the emotion you put into them, though...poor Hiei. Just don't start picking on Botan (M...) and it's all good. One quick sugestion, perhaps you might consider removing the word "my" from line four of Masquerade. Removing it makes the poem flow a bit better (try speaking it out loud) without losing any meaning. (cowers in fear) Please don't hurt me! I know it's your work, it was just a sugestion. On a related note, your fanfic "Deliver me to you" looks promising as well. I hope things start going better for you and you find time enough to do all the things you enjoy. Not because I'm so concerned, mind you, I just want you to update. :) More poems please!

hi ali its me! nice poems

O_o That was deep. I liked it. Write some more.