I don't think Luffy would've believed that Zoro betrayed him. He would be in denial/wouldn't believe it to be true.

I love it. The story was emotional. It was really good.

ch10 drives me crazy...nami is just plain stupid...would she have fought and not surrendered and waiting for help zoro would not nee to get up and badly hurt... the same for this stupid cow vivi...this women has no sense of right or wrong...she seems to find it right that People kill them even while misslead...bu with a crazy mob out for blood you cant talk withut knocking some sense in them...so yes they nee to be punished and then she can talk with them, but now ecause this two stupid women who have air between the ears as well as the always stupid lysop...they are in more danger

they really should kick this three out of there Group...and would be much safer and fin true Navigator and cannon weapon spec. somewhere else...

nice

All i can say is thank you.
Thank you so much

second time reading! BEAUTIFUL

That.. Was quite the emotional roller coaster.
I must say, I loved this so much.. Zoro/Luffy is seriously so good, and the way you wrote it was just- YES. It was sad but sweet and I almost cried here and there, and there's only been a handful of fics on here that make me cry. The was you wrote this - so convincingly, with the characters forced to act of of character - really had me drawn in and I really couldn't ask for more. This was simply brilliant. I want to thank you for writing this. Wonderful work.

I hate Nami so much and her stupid interest ruining the stupid moment

I had a one piece dream last week, which is odd because I haven't watched the show in ages, but when I woke up I knew I had to read this story. I forgot how great it is. Definitely a treasure I'll be coming back to for years to come.

MMMMMMM beautiful! My only note for this entire story is that you missed a comedic moment!
Nami: five million belli
Zoro: *fakes death
you dangled it in front of me like bate on a line. ughhhhhhhh.
But other then that amazing story telling and you beautifully captured who zoro is as a person, not something I see a lot in fanfictions like this. oddly enough.

Amazing ** Couldn't stop reading until I got to the end...

Great story. Thank you for keeping it gen. Not everyone likes yaoi. I like how well you capture the way Luffy and Zoro communicate without saying much to each other at all. I love that about them. Admittedly, I did have some doubts about the plot when Luffy actually left Zoro to die (albeit briefly), but the rest of the story makes up for those out of character actions. Thank you for sharing this.

Love the story but I wanted to let you know that you have an incorrect idea about what a shot put is. A shot put is a disc that is thrown for distance in the olympic sport of the same name. It still works the way you used it in the story but the clay object you describe in your note is called a clay pigeon or skeet and is used in skeet shooting.

* cries from the feels *
This was so touching! * sobs * On a more serious note, I really enjoyed the writing style in the story and the characterization. As a mega-fan of Zoro's, I really enjoyed the way he was portrayed. Excellent work!

Of course, Zoro... Duh...

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It's Amazing..! :D
Though... I almost stop in the middle... Hehe... Sorry...

Not because it's not good, it's kinda frustrating...

I was furious with all the conflict...!

But nevertheless... I finished it...!

It was Nice fic...! ;)
Great!