This is a good story. Dark but not too dark. But how come no one recgonizes Harry?

This was an awesome well written story!

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I quite enjoyed your story. The ending was very sweet.

Weird... I dont know what to feel about your story, but i kind of like it and kind of not...

I'm having a huge smile on my face from your story

Amazing. Please do more

this was an absolutely amazing piece. well thought out and very creative. i love how strong snape seems to be through this piece both mentally and physically and harry was very brave and frienly. well written. write on!

Hi,

poor Harry. He is really brave to go back to the castle when he is in Headquarters.
I liked the change in relationship between Harry and Snape.
The story has just the right mixture between beeing dark and beeing hopeful.

Greetings
Andrea

I want more!

Please, if Snape is "working for Voldemort as a spy in the Order" in Voldemort opinion and his task is to make the Order believe that hes their spy and manages it well then Harry will that Snape is loyal to Dumbledore! And the answer is just the same if Snape is really on the Light's side. So what was the point in asking Harry about Snape?

Oh my god that was amazing. I am IN LOVE with this story! You are an amazing writer. Keep on writing!

loved your short story - happy that SEv and Harry became friends at the end.

About Veritaserum: couldn't Harry James Potter say 'James' for the first question ('What's your [middle] name?')? It wouldn't be a lie, it is his name, just not full. And for the second question ('"Full name [of your favorite film/book/history character]"') Harry could also tell an evasion, such as 'James Taylor'. With unclear question, it should be possible to persuade Veritaserum whatever you want, to evade the truth without telling a lie. Such as, 'Is Snape spying for Dumbledore?' - no, Snape is spying against Voldemort for the Order of Phoenix, not for Dumbledore, if Dumbledore went to the Dark side, Snape would automatically stop spying for him, because Snape spies for the Light side; no, right at this moment Snape isn't spying for Dumbledore, because there is no information Snape could bring to Dumbledore about Voldemort, partially because Dumbledore is expected to attack this moment; shortly, 'no', 'no' and 'no'.

Good luck. I would be interested to hear about a book where Veritaserum is evaded spectacularly by such half-truths and deliberate misunderstanding of the vague questions.

very good