hahaha funny fic though i must admit wat daisuke might

have been oing threw ;

anyways awesome fic xD

Oh my god...wow...what can i say about this fic?...you should make a sequal! This is really, if not just a bit freakishly, cool~! I wanna know what happens next!

lol awesome story very amusing please write more tai and daisuke stories lol

Cu~uute fic!

I have not read a good Taisuke like this in a while. It was short, but ever so much fun. Taichi is quite the pervert, heh. I like how you had the transition from Jun to Taichi. Very well done, that part was.

this was cute. i really enjoyed reading this.

Rae~! It took me a while to get here! ;_; I wanted to read earlier, truly I did, just... Meh. Stupid spring break ending and all that FUN stuff. Schools are uncool. But taisuke is t3h pretty~! Yis! *giggles* So~o... Typical Lira babble, as always! Fwee! Rant-time~...
"Pairing: Taisuke (Lecherous Taichi warning!)"
*blank stare* ...is this supposed to SURPRISE us? D I mean... Doesn't Taichi-kun, like, COME that way? *gigglefits*
"overuse of a minor canon character. (but I like Jun, so it's okay.)"
*pouts* So~o? I like Jun to~o! XP
"I do, however, get a sick enjoyment out of putting them into odd situations. Now, for your reading pleasure..."
D Because I'm amused. And because I can SO quote your introduction type thing to PIECES if I fucking WANT to. So there. And NOW the reading TRULY begins! *maniacal laughter*
I mean, tis a lil ficcy, so no worries.
"Yes, I realize he doesn't quite fit into the poodle skirt and it looks funny since he's tied halfway up the flagpole. I'm just trying to tell you it's not as bad as it looks. Really."
*snickerfit* Because Dai-chan always seems to find himself in seifuku, but poodle skirts are a new development. D And Taichi, Taichi, Taichi... *shakes head* I rove him to farking death. You rock. XP
"He was far enough up the fall could be fatal, a fact which finally managed to imprint itself on Jun's face, overriding the greed with sudden realization she'd get blamed since she was there and now accountable for her brother. "Daisuke, get down from there!" Her parents would never forgive her and the news would get out and ruin her chances with all the hot guys."
First... TECHNICALLY, a fall from a flagpole is too short to be fatal. Really. At least, it isn't a far enough fall to be considered fatal for suicide- doesn't mean you still couldn't DIE from it. Yeah... I forgot the height you'd have to jump from to ensure your death. I've also conveniently forgotten why I bother to learn this stuff...
Also more than a tad bit amused by Jun and her hot guys. XD
I'd like to letcha know that I -love- the way you transitioned between Jun-view and Taichi-view. D Such fun. I rove Taichi-kun~! *fangirlishness*
"Daisuke, you trust me, right?"
...have I mentioned lately that Dai-chan is farking INSANE for doing so?
...and you end it with dear Taichi-kun molesting poor, unconscious Dai-chan! You make me want to write. Oh, Rae-chan, thankies for making me want to write again~! I've been wanting to do origi-fic, but there -are- a few things I'd sorta like to work on first. I mean, I've put ES off since August- a few weeks more won't KILL it. But yes! You rock! I roves t3h pretty taisuke *.* I have...
A taisuke one-shot that I kinda sorta never completely FINISHED. If I tinker with that a bit, I could even have it online. And then there's SCMM, from somethingzany! That DOES require work~!
I love you. You rock. I'm off to TRY to write.
~*Lira-chan*~

. that was cute and weird... but mostly cute! Yay cute-ness! o_O you should write more! pwease? Ill read if you do! Thers nothing better than having a cute, funny one shot turned into a story! o.O;; umm, well I think so! anywhos, very nice. ..::laughs at the thought of dai-chan in a skirt... about to be molested by tai-chan::.. I don't think that should be giving me a warm fuzzy feeling... but it is! .
je ne,
kitsune-sama

I loved it. P Will there be more? If so...I'LL READ IT! I PROMISE AS LONG AS MY EYES HAVEN'T BEEN DEVOURED BY THE TV SCREEN, I'LL READ IT! . Your work's just that good.

*laughs a little* Perverted Taichi! Well, I won't tell if he doesn't. ;) I've been racking my brains all evening trying to come up with a decent plotlet for a short Taichi/Daisuke...now I know where all the TaiDai ficlet ideas have been hiding! Maybe now one will be lured over to me...
All in all, it was kind of cute and funny. I like the hints at the Daisuke and Jun sibling relationship. Though I'm not so certain on the "all the hot guys" angle...Jun seems to focus on one at the time, and put all her efforts onto that one guy until she knows one way or the other. Though it could be taken in the sense she's between guys at the time of this story. Hard to say since I didn't quite catch any timeline notes.
One tiny little mistake I did find. "As much as we was liking" (I think you meant *he* was liking). Other than that, everything was sparklingly beautiful in grammar, style, and paragraphs. *Squishes the paragraphs* Completely lovely. I highly enjoyed.
Did I scare you with this long review? ;)