Reviews for Bad Day
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Did you delete the last half of your story? Cuz' I see reviews for chapters 1-4, but I can only find chapter 1!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Hello Any body there? ... this is a good story! But... it's been 10 years... wow
Tenma no ouji-sama chapter 4 . 9/6/2012
I've been looking all over for this fic, but because I couldn't remember the author or the title of the story I couldn't go searching for it and the only thing I knew was that Ryo was raped and it was a Fuji/Ryo story and it hadn't been under the Ryo/Fuji category.

Anyways I like the story just as much as the first time I read it which was several years ago.

Tenma
aku no tensai chapter 3 . 2/20/2012
Never mind about my last review. However, I still think that things are going a bit too fast~

Also, you said that Ryoma was kidnapped when he was leaving the burger place, but (in the flashback) he was kidnapped while he was on his way back home from the movie theater with Eiji. Other than that, great chapter! NOOOOOO~! Why'd you have to try to commit suicide Ryo-chan! I would've never forgiven him if he succeeded.

By the way, usually, after an attempt at suicide, the hospital will force the patient to speak with a psychiatrist whether the family/person approves of it or not. For safety precautions. The parent/guradian has to sign the admission form of course~

-AnT
aku no tensai chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
How old was Ryoma when it happened?

Two things I'd like to point out:

1) Evergreen is, well, green; and Ryoma's eyes are golden.

2) The first chapter kinda, at least for me, went by a little too fast; I understand how hard it is to prolong a chapter though so, it's not a big deal or anything~

And one thing I'd like to say: I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!

Please continue with the story. :)

-AnT
yumi2482 chapter 4 . 11/16/2008
hahahahaha. nice
DevilPrincessOfDarkWorld chapter 4 . 8/17/2008
i liked the story how you made ryozen (that's my nickname for ryoma) took up being sadistic.i think it's interesting to make him sadistic on me and rory's story.

~mory~

mory your sadistic and all but sometimes leave some for me ok.

~rory~

but i thouth you wern't sadistic.

~mory~

i know but i like to see poeple suffer, i like your story by the way 7thcircleofhell-san
Bonnie Mizuhara chapter 4 . 9/18/2006
Aw poor Ryoma but I kinda enjoy Ryoma torture... is that being sadistic? Ryoma being sadistic is kinda... weird, I prefer him being the uke! Yay! Ryoma-chan and FujiRyo!
SenkoHasegawa chapter 4 . 2/28/2006
HI!

Nice fic!

The end was great, interesting plot... Fuji and Ryoma! This is the 3rd time I read this fic XD

Can I translate it to spanish? I think it could be interesting to see if they like it as much as me!

(Which is very probable...)

Keep up the good work!

Ja ne!

-Senko-
KagomeGirl021 chapter 4 . 12/12/2004
ahh that was intense! dude u should put like a side note about what the other team members thought of these incidents esp the part about him slitting his wrists. im quite curious as to what u would write. anyways keep up the awsome work _
Tora Macaw chapter 4 . 11/4/2004
Having now read the whole story, I must say even though Fuji/Ryoma is not my favorite pairing, this was a very well written and moving story.

*sweeps hat off and bows*
Tora Macaw chapter 2 . 11/4/2004
OH poor, poor Ryoma! this is so sad, but so well written! I can really feel the emotion pouring through.
XxMaster-ExX chapter 4 . 5/29/2004
That was so sweet! ~~ I love Fuji/Ryo so much... haha... Ryoma took up on being sadistic... I can imagine it now... *imagines Ryoma with a Fuji-smile* ... scary...
MightyMouse XD chapter 4 . 5/29/2004
Hey you! Good job. You pulled through the last chapter. Congrats on your first *finished* PoT fanfic. I'm not gonna make any more comments, if you consider them comments, for now...haha.
Blue Orbs-Blue chapter 4 . 5/29/2004
aaw, fuji saved ryoma
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