I'm not even going to log in for this. This entire story is not even worth that effort. Not only is the spelling completely horrible, but the grammar itself is scary and makes your eyes burn. Even if English isn't your first language, that's fine, but then you have to get a beta reader. It will help a LOT.

Now onto the horrible, horrible twist and turns of events that for some reason, you found absolutely hilarious. The fact you had Rogue raped and then suddenly had Gambit forgiven in a matter of seconds is implausible, and frankly disgusting. And that lovely "hahahahahahahaha look what i did to Rogue" shit at the end of that chapter? Just goes to show your childish ways and sheltered life style in which you must have lived to even USE such a horrible thing to garner shock value. I am dearly hoping that in these 7 years from when this story was last updated you've matured some, because just that event isn't the most nauseating part, your reaction and affirmative actions toward it are. Rape is not fucking funny. I can tell you've never experienced something as violating and horrible as having your very will taken away and pain inflicted on you like you've never experienced, and I dearly hope you never will.

HE RAPED HER AND SHE FORGAVE HIM IN A DAY! A FUCKING DAY! WHAT THE FUCK?! HE FUCKING RAPED HER AND SHE JUST SAYS OKAY IT'S FINE AND GOES AND KISSES HIM! NO NONNONONONONONONONONO OKAY SHE SHULDNT BE SO OKAY WITH THAT SHE SHOULDN'T BE SO CALM OKAY I KNOW THE AFTERMATHS OF RAPE AND IT AIN'T THAT AND NOW IM PISSED BEYOND BELIEFE AT ROGUE! SERIOUSLY! WWWHHHAAAATTT! IT WAS RAPE NOT SOME LITTLE FIGHT BUT RAPE! WHAT THE FUCK!

THE SPELLING, IT BURNS! I don't care if english isn't your native language. I don't care if you don't have someone to edit your writing. I don't care if you don't like getting flames from reviewers. I understand if you want to write in dialect, but the rest is just horrible. Man invented spell checker for a reason; copy and paste the stuff into a word doc and press F7 and it checks the spelling and grammar for you.

You would have a great story if you just DIDN'T MISS SPELL EVERY THIRD FREAKING WORD!

you should finish this story! love it!

lol now everyones kidnapping Rogue. I feel so bad for her she lost her son cause of those fucking sick people, thought she lost Remy, and getting kidnapped...AGAIN. but I love this story its awesome.

ok, so not fair leaving it hanging like that for 2 years, please update i only just got back into reading this pairing and it's so depressing to find a great story, that is not only writen by a master but, has a fantasic plot line that is beyond perfect. so, please i'm begging you down on my knee's update please

Woah!

I like... started reading your story yesterday...and I hope you'll update soon, coz it's great!

The whole plot, everything! and think it started just as a "second kidnapping"...Hope you continue soon!

And give them a Happy endding, please xD this kednapping for helpo things never end good, it seems!

Then again, great story! keep on!

hi i just started to read your story ya kinda late i know but i like it. man you made me cry i must be getting soft. i love the way you wright and the style you put a lot of effort in to this story. so are we going to here how Remy got out and what he is doing with the morlocks? well i have enjoyed reading this.

twilight mutt

OMG! YOU UPDATED! and i didn't even get an alert (weird...) anyway, good chapter! and i'm glad Remy's alive!

-ultimategammy91

I wish you would update, I know you are probably busy but, I miss this story so much.

When did you update this ?

(EMIT SHAKES HEAD) : She one of your biggest fans and now she feels left out "TSK TSK "

I have missed this so much I've gotta re-read this now !

Start at chap. one and continue on ...now you done it now I'm hooked thanks K!

this chappy was realy good please don't leave me hangin'PLEASE !

I will hyperventilate !

anyway write to me haven't heard from you in a while hunn !

I gots good news !

B _

*Does a lil dance* OMG ur bck! Yay, id almost given up! Dis is one of da best fics Iv read (no offence 2 da ovas iv read! lol soz) although it was mean 2 leave us all finkin poor Remy was dead! Bt ur bck now so I 4giv u, lol. G8 2 av u bck sugar, Keep updatin! x

phew... thought that it wasn't gonna be updated anytime soon... anyway, good to have u bak... u n the new chapters... hehe... :) what can i say, i like ur story...

YES! You're BIA!

Love the chapter. A bit tricky with the nigthmare and the Morlocks... but I love it. And best of all Remy is alive, not that i doubted you... i know you could never kill him. :P

I was a bit surprised you update so fast, but what can i said... i love surprises and specially this one.

Anyway... Update soon Dudette!

Adios,

BiDi

Y have u stopped there"! ur frist chapter in like ten years and u stop there! no no no! update! and YAYAYAY he isnt dead!