Cannot wait for an update. Love the original twist you've given it. I can't wait to see where this story goes

Please don’t tell me you have finished. This was an original and intriguing story. I really loved it.

You paced the events well and best of all it was well written. I like your writing style because it is descriptive enough to give the reader a good idea of the scene, characters feelings and actions, without over-doing it.

I really NEED to know what happens next with Sydney, Sark and baby Luke. I NEED know how Sark survived the gun shot and who helped him. I NEED you to continue this story.

Thank you for a great Sarkney.

Lisa :)

Beautiful! I love the idea and your writing skills! The last pharagraph is very emotive and I think is perfect for the action! Is it Complete? You could have continued. Congratulations! Very good! I cry in the first Chapter when Sark was shoot, I love the character, he is a enigma!

Oh I hope you continue!

such a great story :)

Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

YEAH! FIANLLY SOME GOOD OLD FASHIONED SARKNEY LOVIN

VERY GOOD LOVED THE DETAIL AND LOVING THE PLOT

Wow! What a great story1- no dont worry im not being sarcastic. Update soon!

Wow, that was great. She finally found Sark! I can't wait to find out what happened to her.

This is a beautiful story! I love seeing Sark in a light other than an evil lunatic whom Sydney hates. I can't wait to see how Vaughn reacts to her relationship. Please update soon!

It's great so far, I can't wait for more!

Aw! I don't know who I feel worse for, Sark or Sydney! I thought that was cute, how Sark was sorta watching over her, and how they were sort of passing notes to each other. :) I hope you update soon!

ah is she going to see sark?/ yeah!

Very interesting, I love it! Update soon!

i do hope sark is really alive. Nice story. Can't wait till update