That was very sad and sweet. Poor them!

Once more, thank you. If I can't find the words in English, I'll write them in French, hoping you can understand.

These 3 fics I just read, these three poems... Si les yeux sont les mirroirs de l'âme, tes mots sont les portes qui permettent d'y accéder. J'ai lu beaucoup de fic, mais peu m'ont touché autant que celles-ci. Dragon Ball n'est pas un fandom qui se prête facilement à la poésie, pourtant la tienne sonne juste. Même pour Végéta, tout est juste. Merci infiniment

Thank you

Hallolo

That...*cry*...so...*sniff*...sad.

GREAT JOB

Owwo! 0

That's just beautifull...

Really sweet!

I really loved how you wrote Trunk's thought's about his father... Like he was talking to him...

Awesome!

I'm saving it as a fave...

Keep it up. )

Anorake*

I have a couple of poems, but now if you want to check them out it's your choice! P

Stay Cool! D

Yes, Trunks is about 13-14 years old. Excellent work.

its me again! and of course, i like ur stuff and yeah...and i would love to review all of your story/peom stuff, but i dont feel like it! so...um..yea!

That was such a pretty poem; I almost cried! You're a really talented poem, and you didn't break from the rhythm but maybe once or twice. Very, very good job!

~Straight from Uranus~

AW! That was so sweet! Man, that was sad! GReat job!

OMG! That was really sad and I don't want to rain on your parade or anything but Trunks didn't train when he was little. He started when he was about 14. It was still really good.
7 out of 10

Aww kute!
-*-Crowsi-*-

...AW! - So sweet and cyoot and EE. _ Mwee. I'm really really really hyper right now, and I have no idea why I'm putting this in my review, and - *is thwacked by a random muse*...Shutting up.