Beautiful, just beautiful.

I feel Fred's pain and Angel's for that matter. :(

The chocolate bottle line was cute.

Well done!

Great start!

Very well done! I love reading your fanfiction. Angel should have given Fred a chance. Also if I could ask if you could do a a story where Spike and Fred get together that would be nice, :)

to bad that is it .

I really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. :) You wrote it well. )

This is amazinggg!

You have both Fred and Angel's character spot on.

Loved every word of it!

Brilliant job. :]

wow, that was so ...intoxicating but so awesome! the perfect moment was this one :

“Let me go, Angel,” she pleaded. If he held on to her for just one more second, she’d lose that thin veneer of control completely. “Please…” She practically sobbed the word.

“Fred…Fred…calm down…”

“I can’t calm down. I can’t! For five years I was an animal, Angel. An animal. A cow. Nothing more. I had no feelings. I had no future. I had no hope. All my plans failed and failed and failed, and you saved me from that. But I’m not an animal any more, and I don’t feel like a real girl either. I feel like I’m in some sort of limbo…purgatory…stuck there.”

“What do you mean?”

Her façade crumbled and she buried her face in his chest. “I need you.”

“I can’t…” Angel started helplessly.

Her body jerked with a sob. His hold tightened on her, and they stood silently in the middle of the lobby until she quieted.

Angel kissed the top of her head, his lips lingering in her hair. He inhaled deeply, and his breath tickled her scalp. “Oh Fred,” he breathed.

God that part was so perfect, it was so realistic! thanks for sharing.

WOW, that was amazing i always though Fred would be good for Angel, someone new and fresh, someone whose more mature that she seems and yet not, someone totally unlike Buffy, and Cordy too.

i think shes someone who'd bring out all the protective instincts he has, the ones that annoyed Buffy and Cordy b/c after all they could 'take care of themselves thank you very much.'

i just find that this pairing has a special place in my heart.

Awesome chapter!

LOVES IT! If Angel ha d an orgasam didn't he have perfect happiness and wouldn't that change him into Angules?

This was really sweet! Wish it had been longer :) There aren't enough Fred & Angel stories out there. Thanks for this one!

Angel/Fred shippers unite! Lol, great story, I've always been inlove with A/F, so this was a pleasant surprise. Wonderfully written _

That was a great chapter! I love Angel/Fred pairing..although you rarely see it!