To start, you are fantastic writer and I have reread Mythology, My Knight, and My Son's Wedding many times when I've needed a pick-me-up on rough days over the past seven years; and I've been now rereading to my newborn daughter. You breathe believeable life into the characters. Please consider continuing this series! Seifer and Quisty's wedding. I'd love to see how Quistis adoptive parents are dealt with as well as CID and Edea playing a role in their wedding. Maybe Cud filling in for Quistis and Edea for Seifer. The babies births. Selphie and Irvine engagement/wedding (I could totally see them doing a fast spontaneous thing with a week or less planning). Maybe a futuristic one with Squall and Rinoa's son/daughter and Seifer and Quistis' son/daughter getting engaged of married and the way that the fathers deal with it. I can see an overprotective Seifer with his daughter.

Also, any plans to continue Mythology?

With deepest thanks
~ Jess (aka FrostLeonhart)

Loved it from start to finish! Caraway chasing Squall had me in tears, as well as some other moments haha. Very well written! ]

HI,

I just want to tell you that this is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read _ You did an amazing job.

Thank you!

Lol Squall at a Bachelor Party! Zell is sooo forgetful.

I really enjoyed having General Caraway swear, chase, threaten with the army at Squall. It was all super hilarious. Along with the fact that both Squall and Seifer would name their sons after themselves.

Really great and funny story that somehow makes all the characters even more lovable so kudos for that!

Just one thing. What did CID mean by MY son or daughter's wedding? Was he calling Squall and Rinoa his son and daughter respectively?

Cheers

Keep Writing

Crud. Why is the chapter cut off? NOOO! I hope you get to fix it. :

lol loving this slightly wacky world ... especially loving the chase between squall and caraway had me laughing all the way !... kinda hope squall buries the hatchet with laguna in the next chapter though ...

thanks for the story

rob

Well, I love this story, just like all the others that you've written. x) I was re-reading it today, and when Squall has this conversation with Laguna:

"WHAT THE HELL IS IT NOW?" Squall growled viciously.

"Squall, it's me-" Laguna began, only to be cut off again.

"Listen! I don't care WHO you are! If you call me again, I'll hunt you down and rip out your throat AND break all your fingers so you'll never call me again, got it?" he hissed. The phone was slammed once again and Laguna winced.

What if it was Rinoa? xD Poor Squall... he'd probably be in for it.

Love this sequel! Actually, I love Sf/Qs more than Sq/Rn but that's cool, since this one didn't really bash anyone but Seifer... and Laguna.. and I'd say the former is kinda needing some... heheheh...

The wedding finally happened, huh? Now Squall can relax..

For a serious chapter, this was still pretty funny(:

Like, Rinoa and her crazy wedding plans. She sure is prepared x_o;

And the fire alarm was genius! Laguna is just adorable, why don't you like him Squall? Ah!

Laguna? Squall? WEDDING?

I love it already. (:

Love how General Caraway, Laguna, Squall, & Rinoa are all acting around each other. It's so cute! In a weird way x_O;

And Selphie just loves to worry people, doesn't she? Ahh, can't wit till the wedding already :DD

Awesome story, it was very funny. I loved the ending.

Pft...LOL! Must be one of the greatest humor story yet!

Never thought will I see the day that Squall will fle from any man. Though of course, the man IS his father in law.

I so love the Seifitis chapter. Poor Seifer, soaking wet in the rain XD!

I've also noticed that when things go missing and the gang goes for a crazy back up plan, the things always turn up innocently in the end XP.

Squall Jr...XP, I vote Tempest!

Haha, the focs so entertaining, I'm glad I read all of it though one thing bother's me, isn't Angelo a guy's name...?

Ah the last chapter.

I think i may just tear up a little bit. Its a little sad that the story has to come to a close so quickly. Things were just getting really good and ive been rather sucked into the whole thing. *sigh* oh well.

You revealed the softer side to Caraway once again. Ive noticed a pattern that such thigns only tend to come about when pretty much no one else is watching. It kind of makes him a tender warrior of sorts. One with extreme violent tendencies and bloodloos, but meh. :-)

"Rinoa, it's just a pimple." As soon as he said it, he regretted it.

Thats what happens when people talk without thinking about it first. We call it the foot in mouth gene tht is specifically found in the Y chromosome. He walked into a classic trap that already has me fearing for his well being. I wonder if any of that warrior bloodlust of Caraway's found its way to Rinoa.

So you had Squall go through with the standard tampon buying experience at the store eh? Im surprised it didnt result in more death.

The wife was helping out with the bachelor party? I mean..i know Rinoa would probably be cool with him having one...but i mean...if Squall found out she had a hand in it...thats the kind of thing that would scar you for life.

It sounds like Squall had a ...'great' time at his bachelor party. I loved how you had that same thought 'i'll kill them all' stuck in their head and going on and on like a mantra. It felt so perfectly in line for him.

"Rin, PLEASE ask Irvine not to wear his hat." Selphie told her.

"What? Why? The hat makes him Irvine."

you know. Thats true. You bring up an interesting point. Without the hat...irvine would have just been pathetic in the game.

I know i have said it before. But for some reason this chapter more than others reminds me at least of the humor from father of the bride. Maybe its because its closest to the wedding. who knows.

Caraway just ordered Rinoa to have a girl. So if Rinoa has a boy first...then she's just going to have to try again and again and again with Squall until they have a daughter. Does the general realize what he's done?

Oh god. I love how throughout this story you ahve created tense situations from relatively simple problems. Everytime someone looses something or needs something, its always right there, yet they have to go through a mini-adventure in order to find it. I think thats rather brilliant. Its funny and can definitly be trademarked as being very 'you'.

The room stood up as her father took a deep breath. "Remember, if he's not good enough..." her father said just as they took a step forward.

Rinoa giggled slightly. "I'll love him anyway." Rinoa assured him.

That is my favorite 'aww' line in the chapter. It was soo sweet and beautiful.

Wow. Cid is in for a world of trouble.

Anyways.

This was an absolutely amazing story and i cherished reading every part of it. Truthfully some parts were a bit slower than i would have liked, but it was still an amazing line of stories. best part is if you decide to continue this line of thougth some day, you certainly could with all the possibilities out there. I think by producing this you have raised the bar on the standards for a good fanfic a bit higher than they were before.

I dont remember which, but it was either this story or the prequel that got me inspired to even try writing ff8. I mean i just read somethign so wonderfully profound and amazing that i thought to myself 'i want to write like that someday.'

So you have my many thanks and unended appreciation. I know you must have inspired many people with your works, and provided tons of entertainment.

It appears as if Quistis has a bit of news that needs to be shared with everyone. I think i can already guess what you are alluding to, but with you one has to learn to expect surprise after surprise.

And Rinoa buzzes by with word that Squall fainted. How unusual. hm...i wonder what..or who has him so stressed out. :-P

And it looks like Squall has good reason for fainting as well. He's going to be a father! Wow. that reaction does seem to be perfect from him. The way you have styled him, he likes his world to be orderly and constant, and these things keep interupting it.

However i do like how you do make him happy about having the baby so soon instead of otherwise. I think he would want to do the things with his child that he never got a chance to do with his father.

On that note...caraway is going to kill him. Plain and simple

I like this distinction you constantly have Squall make over fainting and passing out. It sounds like something most guys would do just...because. I mean...lets face it. Its simply more manly to pass out than faint.

Now how Rinoa knew about Quistis and all is a mystery. Although it is a bit brash for her to reveal their pregnancy like that.

General Caraway seems to be bringing a lot of anger and intensity against the person who did give him his daughter back. Understandable since that same man now seeks to take his daughter away from him forever.

I do feel a bit bad for Squall because having to put up with this onslaught and fury surely cant be good for anyone's health.

"Because you're the father of his grandchild," Rinoa explained. "He wouldn't kill you and allow his grandchild to have no father."

"Great...he won't KILL me..." Squall grumbled as he crossed his arms. "He'll just beat me until I'm in a coma."

I loved that bit of dialogue in the chapter. Very nicely written.

The only thing that could possibly make this whole mess worse for Squall is...oh yes..you wrote it in...the introduction of his father while Caraway is still there.

What did the general think they were doing anyways? I mean come on, they were living in the same Garden, dating for so many years and now engaged. Yeesh.

But its funny how no one is worried how much stres this will put on Rinoa. Interesting. Well i sit corrected. All of her friends have just pointed out she needs her rest.

One intereting bit of irony that you put into your story was having caraway talking abotu being a loving and attentive parents. His failure to do so is part of the reason why she left. It adds a nice touch to the chapter i think. Especially since you have Caraway realize his shortcomings.

I think it would be hilarious to see a Squall JR! That would be mind boggilingly hysterical!

Dear lord. Seifer is already thinking that far into the future between their kids? Jeeze. I do hope that Squall has a girl though. Women in general seem to get through to him better.

Rinoa had Squall go back to see her father after her father had learned when teh child was concieved?

Thats it. The verdict is in. Rinoa is trying to have Squall killed in some way. Its some evil feminine gene that's locked deep within that seeks pleasure from the pain of males.

I really did enjoy this chapter however. Much better than the previous ones. It had a nice flow and moved the story along well. It does add a whole new range of conflict very close to the end of the series, but thats ok.

Anyways, as usual, great job.,

The start of the chapter has me in for a laugh very quickly. Rinoa, the almighty sorceress can actually reply with 'Its magic, i just knew' and really get away with it. I never really thought about that before.

He forgot to mail the checks in huh? its amazasing how many times he has actually risked causing anger to Rinoa and she is the one that actually likes him.

Aha! i knew it! I knew Squall would envy the dog! He just had to with all the cushy treatment it has been getting throughout the duration of your fictions! Its kinda funny though. Man envies dog.

Once again it is Squall who will act as a sort of buffer between Rinoa and Laguna. I love how he constantly protects Rinoa from the occasional buffonary that comes from Laguna. Its like he wants that image Rinoa has of his father to remain there while he takes up all the burden. Its something like this that relates very well to his character in teh game. I think you captured the moments where Squall keeps everything inside and tries to handle situations alone perfectly. Fantastic.

Ironically enough, everythign comes back down to the binder, does't it?

The kind of error you had Laguna make in sending out those checks was unique and ties in well. It should make sense that he would screw up the job that relates to his presidential work. he hates paperwork and other office tasks like that, so its natural that these tasks should hate him back. :-P

'How can one man...No...no, don't think about it...it'll only drive you nuts.' that was my favorite line from the chapter. I think it captures the essense of the nonsense going on here.

"If he were a child on Christmas morning, Squall eyes couldn"

I think you got something missing there.

Anyways it was a relatively short chapter i think. The one aspect i didnt like was that it didnt really feel like as much happened here as in other chapters. Usually the antics do go on longer.

however your overall style and sense of humor when writing this more than make up for it so it was well enjoyed.