beautiful story! and i love how a) you wrote riku. hes angsty, but not in that really emo "i hate my life im going to kill myself now, bye" way, but in that "why'd you have to betray me sora?" way. also the reasons why he feels the way he does. and b) kairi isnt a major betch and riku doesnt hate her. in some stories its okay, but it usually annoys me /. so all in all, good freaking job D!

Amazingly written!_ Im choked up by it all, and your notes at the end really revealed the genius of it all-i felt pretty stupid not thinking about it. I wish this would count as a summer reading assignment but I guess Ill have to settle witha newberry prize winner..

*wibble* hahhaha the end made me all...like sad and happeh~ hahahah " poor Riku interesting perspective~ so much love~ ahahha

I love this story! It's really well written...Everyone seems to like writing angsty Riku stories...most of them (including this one) are really good.

Sarah... I don't know what to say. I would babble on about how better you are than me, but that would only ruin what you wrote...

I loved it. Really, I did. I can see also why you like it as well...

I like how you go on and tell everyone why you wrote things the way you did... you really don't give people credit... (Don't worry, neither do I and most don't deserve it if given in the first place)

I agree with you on the ending. The first one is pretty, but the second one fits much better. I would tell you why, but then you would think I am a dork and tell me I'm reading far too far into things that weren't meant to be taken that way... *sigh*

m... nice & angsty... _ poor Riku... he just doesnt understand why Sora has the keyblade & runs around with goofy & donald, ... he thinks sora ditched him... poor Riku T_T

Ooh. Backround on Riku's mother as well. :D And I loved how you ended it, with the 'Rain rain, go away...' song. I always thought that song was sad in its own little way.

Adorably sad sidefic that could easily stand on its own. Good job.

I loved it. *glomps you*

Aw! But I loved how you didn't make Riku some emptionless puppet *that's always bugged me* but instead had him be hurt that Sora left, and feel betrayed and abandoned. Loved that, so much!

The whole rain thing... adored it. And *whistles innocently* I love a sick/hurt Riku. It's so cute... you should make a sequel ... in which Sora finds Riku! Please? *puppy eyes*

I love your writing style. So wholesome, and descritptive and angsty, and i loved Riku's sarcasm, in contrast to his very honest feelings (which I adored even more)

Great ending, and the whole story was very very vyer well done! *sighs happily* Adore it! Sequel?

great story! hope you write more stories like this!

This is a really good story!

Uhm.. O_o" Whoa. Amazing character views from Riku - You make it seem you're actually him and since thinking and pondering deeply, and after, usually not caring - on the outside, anyway - fit in perfectly! ...Okay, enough with my rambling :P

*Sends in KH:CoM Game with Sora's part complete and the Reverse/Rebirth part for Riku opened*

THAT GAME IS SO ADDICTIVE!

*runs with the game and GBA SP in hand*

Wow, this was interesting. It was kinda sad and beautiful. I must say I did enjoy it bunches. I loved the way it ended, very nicely done. Keep it up!

Hee, Riku doesn't like rain! And I finally know what the hell your KH fics are about! Yay! Lovely Rikuness . . . um . .. yes . . .