This story looks good update soon

Are you still continuing with this story? I hope you do because it is really, really good.

Good, but Why would Draco's mom ever Become friends with a Muggle? It's like against their family tradition!

Ok like this layout much much better. I actually ended up reading this. Ok this is not the BEST I have ever read (Well nothing compares to Priah so far) but you know it's got potential. What I want to know is why did Draco cry? I'm not asking you for an explenation, just for little 'thought' detail next time. I mean when I write I make chapters extra long, even though I don't need to. Ppl hate that, but I have a problem with shortening all my character is thinkning. You have the other prob, as in not really mentioning it. I miss that. Don't worry about the rating (ha you should see mine, it's like R and the sex should actually be PG13:D) I like it slow, and I think anyone would tell you that. IS THERE A POINT IN THEM THROWING THEMSELVES AT EACHOTHER IN THE FIRST CHAPTER? NO! hehe, agressive again. All in all this is not bad. Too short, too little detail (which is why it's short)... and I guess that's it.
Hope I helped. I'll go on reading this fic...good luck. Faithful

Ok I ASK YOU TRULY to CHANGE THE LAYOUT! Because I can't even get throught this:D Sorry I'm just so used, to u know nice and clear layouts.
Ok another thing: if you accept anonymous reviews you'll get more, at least that's what they say!
Love to give this fic a read:D
GOOD LUCK

great story!

I can't wait to read more. this first chapter is really good.

Your story seems really good i cant wait for an update.

It's okay so far, but you really need to watch your wording. In one sentence you refer to Hermione making pasta and salad and bread sticks. You could have said, Hermione was making pasta with bread sticks and salad on the side. It just would have sounded better.
You also need to watch your paragraphs. You need to make a new paragraph when a new person is talking. When you make it one whole paragraph, it's just hard to read.
This story has a lot of potential, it just needs a little work.

Hey it has potential. I'd love to read more. Update when you can which I hope is soon