| Reviews for My Family |
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SapphiRubyCrys chapter 1 . 8/11/2019 Aww this is so adorable. I love reading from Togepi's Pov |
Zilpa Eden chapter 1 . 7/29/2018 I'll admit the funky grammar was hard to follow at times, but it was a cute idea and I really enjoyed it. |
Conan.212 chapter 1 . 7/23/2018 Okay that was really awful...awful cute and adorable_ |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2018 It was so cute. Even with the Togepi talk, which I found hard to understand but so, so perfect, I could tell that this story actually has some deep emotion and thought to it. I thought it was amazing to see it through Togepi's eyes. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2017 Awesome! ️️️️️ Very cute and enjoyable, keep up the good work! Also dont let the “un-good” critics stop your writing. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 :) |
PokeshipHeart chapter 1 . 7/24/2016 I dunno how much it stings for a guy's ego but... that was extremely cute; so was Togepi! |
LaughingMangoes chapter 1 . 6/21/2016 It was so cute! Toge Togepriiiiiii! |
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 3/25/2015 Ahhhhh! That is BEYOND adorable:). Great story! |
riorio chapter 1 . 3/14/2015 Great! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2014 I understand you wanted to play with the spelling and grammar to make the speaker seem young but the way you did it completely ruined the story. I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs it was so painful to read and try to decipher |
LeChick chapter 1 . 9/4/2014 "It is all up to me." I don't know why picturing baby Togepi saying that was the most adorable thing ever. |
MaxYZ chapter 1 . 6/13/2014 Really cute, lil Togepi. Also Staryu and Starmie are genderless, though how Togepi would interpret that is beyond me. |
tsukirabbit chapter 1 . 10/13/2013 Too much cuteness! But of course, I love it! |
hinatalover445 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013 The cuteness! (spazzes-out from cute-overload) |