Ha! Funny! Sad for Ryuuji, but I loved it all the same. ;)

Oh man, that was awesome! Poor Prince! King Kaiba is way too evil.

This rocked! And the whole Otogi-telling-you-a-story angle was really original, great stuff!

interesting style, one I'd certainly like to try one day perhaps.

setoryuuji is absolute LOVE, but it's good to see one that's not fluffy like most.

*hugs Ryuuji* Man, he sure knows how to tell a fairy tale! Especially one without a happy ending!

Also he seemed rather good at making what something that sounded humorous from the beginning, yet have a reader with her stomach whirling (or whatever) and brace herself for the "angst", and still get through with irony and bitter sarcasm 'till the end.

. . .That made no sense, but all I'm trying to say is that he did it pretty good.

;-; Wow... this is so heartbreaking. I don't know what to think; part of me feels like this piece is unfinished, like there's supposed to be some kind of happy ending 10 years later. But then the other part of me knows that that is simply, utterly impossible. It's beautiful and bittersweet, the way every tragic love story should be, and perfectly in-character.

this is great! i want to know what kaiba does though...hehehe...this is great! it is! _

*beams and grins* A wonderful faerietale told by an equally wonderful story-teller. I love the way you wrote Otogi, especially the way in which he talked about himself and Kaiba. (Though of course it was purely a coincidence that the two main-characters in the faerie-tale wore the same names as he and his audience. ;). A most enjoyable read. _

Ah, I already commented on this, didn't I? _V But again, it's very nice~! Especially love the end, "Are you sure it doesn't belong at the beginning after all?"
Yes, yes, and Otogi sounds so... Otogi-ish! :D

Oh. This goes on my favorite stories list. This is AWESOME. And so totally in-character for Ryuuji... XD Funny and angsty. Greatness!

O_O Holy crap, this has got to be one of my fave fics now. Brilliantly written...I love how you wrote Otogi! ;; He's so full of himself...not that he doesn't deserve have every right to be. It was simultaneously funny and angsty, and did both well.
Here's to hoping you have more posted! *goes off to look*