story is. not complete and the link at the end does. not lead you to the rest of the story. author lied.

So, I'm curious: why bother providing alink to a story that doesn't exist? What an absolte crap way to repay people for reading all the way through.

this is weirdly disjointed.

Lol yeah no. "You must be a student" lol no you must not but for the sake of hilarious fanfiction, sure!
Your writing style is very well done

This is a good story

Yusss, a Cure song!

complete and utter crap

*giggles* this gonna be fun

Awww, rape is so romantic and every good romance story needs romantic rape to make it romantic. If you're going to cheapen your story by including unnecessary rape, be adult enough to include that in your summary. This is disgusting and I refuse to read a story where rape is used as a convenient but utterly unnecessary side plot.

This isn't a very good story.

They're getting along do nicely. I really thought Snape would be as snappish and standoffish as he was in the books. I suppose not

Ron is such a prat! Hermione really needs to tell him to go bugger off. And I bet someone's gonna find Hermione's journal…

Aw, Snapey is defending Hermione. Malfoy can go bugger off.

Good lord Snape, way not to draw attention to yourself. Hermione, you're smart and whippet fast; you should've been able to stop that spell.

I always assumed his fater's name was Tobias, hence his middle name being Tobias, after his father. And why hasn't she brought up the locket, the mysterious "brother", the woman in the picture?