Me gusto mucho tu historia diferente a las que habia leido espero sigas escribiendo suerte

I liked it

i want to point another flaw with your story ranma said that only the weirdness of nerima and wealth kept the kuno's from being committed to a institute from in one of the earlier chapters you said kodachi was committed to a institute

i like that you seem to keep everyone in character and im really glad you didn't make nodoka a guiltless saint i cant say how many times people made genma a horrible evil bastard but nodoka is a saint and she would never of made the seppuku contract it genma wasn't such a monster you can probably tell im beyond sick and tired of people doing that its almost as common as people making akane the biggest abusive bitch in history so thank for keeping genma and nodoka in character you dont know how nice it is to know atleast some one remembers what there characters are like

I just finished your story and I was honestly impressed. I'd have liked to see what changes occurred in Ranma's female form as well-things like physical growth, mental outlook, etc. *chuckles* But . . . that's just me.

Between you and me, I think Nodoka needs a good swift kick in her ass for her OWN stupidity.

Take care and thanks for sharing.

I like the story and the way you handled it ( except the mother not sure yet I would hope that a mother that spent such an amount of time searching for her child would be thankful to someone who helped said child that much)

its not a wife beater... it's an undershirt or worse... a muscle shirt... or even a sleeveless tshirt.

however WIFEBEATER is not appropriate

your writing is very good.

original plot and I'm loving it.

hypnotically written...a very nice reading experience

awww i really like thism it was great!

Nice story and I like the aspect that were involved in this story such as the abuse that Ranma and Akane did to each other and lack of normal response by Ranma to his situation!

There is a story similar to this I think and if I remember right the title is "new ranma". In it ranma needs brain surgery, and its also ranma and Akane. I don't like Akane shes too angry. It takes a MAJOR change in her for me to like that match up.

Congrats on your story tho.

Techniquely any time a writer has not completed his story it's Cliffhanger & even sometimes whent it is completed it just worst when it's a fanfic in...for example

Betrayal's Reward...It's completed but there's several unanswered questions

Couch Trips...It's not completed but the last chapter is done in away that It's the end of the story

Hell is a Martial Artist...It's not completed but the last chapter is done with a open end so it could continue but at the same time could be done & finished

Then there's those that are left for months even years because of writers block or they just don't care to finish it

...Uh...sorry for the rant but great story thus far

Pretty Good story but two things wrong

1) Ranma went to school as a guy & was changed him into a girl by Akane as Tofu was driving yet she tells the Doctor she wearing panties which means she was wearing them as a boy even though he says they would be to uncomfortable in boy form

2) Nodoka bought RANKO the frilly, lacey bra's & panties as she wanted her to be a lady not RANMA as she resigned herself to having Tomboy daughter

Good story but two things wrong

1)It's Jusenkyo not Jhusenkyo

2) How could Ranma be wearing panties when Akane changed him into a girl as Tofu was driving?