Why empathy? The pirates so far have done nothing to make Samus empathise with them. At least, not from what I've seen so far apart from their leader putting his hand on her shoulder in understanding.

wow...weird twist...never would have expected that. ever.

still doing great!

loved it. giant robot, future evil bounty hunter, possible doomsday weapons, betting, and coffee. sounds like star wars crossed with metroid crossed with a normal adult's workday. lol.

keep up the good work!

Sorry about that last message I had just finished reading your story and I wanted more, if you could publish this book than you would make A LOT of money, or if you could get in contact with retro studios. Jimmy, you have an opportunity here with this novel...if you don't take that opportunity than you will regret is someday, from the bottom of my heart I plead you to get in contact with a publisher and become a best selling publisher, and reactivate the generator before we are all vaporized!

If you do not write more I WILL CEASE TO LIVE!

I really enjoyed this story, but I still wonder what it was that the elevator in the frigate led to. It's suspense like this that makes stories like this one good. Hope to see more of your stories in the future.

beautifully written, I am one hell of a Metroid "nerd" as you could say and this is the best I have ever seen when it comes to fanfics. if reading ever gets popular with metroid fans you could make a lot of cash from publishing this book.

wow i love the strategy although i feel sorry for epsillius when samus rapes him with her cannon, oh well, also i did love that lucky break dash had with ridley but now he is a dead man, no way that sniper rifle can track ridley at the speed he moves and his shgb isnt strong enough to actually hurt him all things considering. yes kraid is the biggest retarded monster in metroid besides the old brain( which was fucking annoying in zero mission) but u should have samus slaughter them and then go on a pirate killing spree. till next chapter

Wow...this is the first Metroid fic I read, but I doubt I'll find something better in the whole fandom. Your writing style is exellent, it really seems another episode of the series. Now there are 4 fronts; Zebesians, Radon Pirates, Dash and Samus. Whoo-hoo. Who's going to win? Samus always kicks ass, anyway. Well, I've added this story to my favorites now. Now you should feel guilty, you heartless bastard, because thanks to your fic I'm going to waste many hours of my life replaying MP, MP2 and MF. So, at least you have to update soon! Hehe. ;)

Excellent. Update soon.

Wow, lots of things are going on at once now. Another good chapter, I must say. I sure hope Dash and Samus get out of their jams with their lives intact.

Krai is an absolute moron. Please continue.

Dude, it's about damn time I found a decent Metroid fic.

I've got my eye on this one.

Damn, this is going to be ugly for Kraid. He is going to lose a lot of Pirates under his command using a full-frontal assault.

Please continue when you get the chance.

What? that pirate is SO dead! literally, in his unfortunate case. lol...

Wow. nice chapter. Who will win Samus's mind? who's good? who's evil? who's in between?

ok, enough of that. i think i already asked you that, and obviously, you need to update for me to find out. SO UPDATE!

nice description of the Chozo Ghost-thingy. it sounded powerful...STUPID PIRATE!

ok, update now. please.