Cool!

Just checked out the dates on this story, and it's been nearly a year since Chapter 4. I do hope you WILL finish it one of these days - it's too good a story to leave here!

That was great. Please please please write some more!

Wow! What a scorcher! Keep up this standard and you'll be selling more novels than Jackie Collins! Great stuff! Well done..and more of the same asap!

Wonderful story. There's not enough Charles fics out there and this one is definitely one of the best. Can't wait to read more; please update soon :)

Lovely story. Can't wait for the next chapter

I think you have caught the mood just right for all the story so far. chap 3 was no more or less graphic than it needed to be for what you wanted to say. looking forward to reading the rest!

Wow, hot stuff! And well written hot stuff too. Love your chapter title, very true. Please update soon, am eager to know what happens next.

*looking sheepish* I just meant I would like it if she ended up with Hawkeye. And I know it's not nice to say people are racist, I just happened to think of the Bottle Fatigue episode at the time. I do think the character's voices are well written here. Peace.

'Elle', if you're reading this - Reviews are supposed to be for comments about whether you're enjoying the story, and constructive advice on whether the writer can improve his/her style - not for sneering (and, incidentally, incorrect) remarks about the characters. If you want to do that, go find a bulletin board, where people can answer back.
Kinkles, ignore her. Charles is a sweetie, you're doing a good job here and I for one hope that for once he gets the girl.

If Karen ends up with Charles I think it shows some poor judgement . . . he's racist and arrogant.

Wow, you have certainly caught my interest here, with an interesting and slighlty different sort of story.
One minor point (nitpicking here, sorry) - you sometimes use commas where you should really have full stops, so your sentences seem a bit breathless. Or maybe that's intentional?
Anyway, I'll be looking for the next chapter with interest - who's she going to choose, and what's the significance of those dreams I wonder?

A most promising debut! I like the way the background story compliments the journey to the unknown adventures at the 4077! That tantalising snogging scene with Hawkeye has just the right balance of sexual innocence and lust! I think you are writing a convincing and well thought out piece, which is fleshing out to what promises to be a great story. Well executed and believable dialogue and a gentle humour that has the reader chuckling with delight!Keep up the good work!