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I really like this story! It's hard to find a School of Rock fanfic with the DeweyRoz coupling, and it's my favourite couple from the movie (really, it's the only couple I ever considered). Most of the stories are centred around the students, sometimes just discarding Dewey entirely, which is a shame 'cause he's my favourite character from the movie as well. Additionally, you did a brilliant job with the dialogue and everything; everyone's maintaining their character, and you do very good for Dewey's speech - his speech is DIFFICULT so I give you high credit for that.

I've only just gotten to start reading it, but I hope to read more; it's the first time in a long time I've been EXCITED to read a fanfic on here! :D

finally I find a decent fic in this section! I loved it!

You're right, the adults in School of Rock are under-appreciated, and this fan fic is very enjoyable. I knew someone out there could do it!

Fluffy but not syrupy or insulting. You managed to keep the characters' personaliites pretty much intact as well, thus avoiding what I consider the greatest of sins in fanfiction.

I do have some trouble buying that Dewey would ever fall for any woman (too much of a wild and free spirit) but this scenario is still believable.

Overall, a more than decent fic. I wish I could read more like this.

So cute! _ I liked the ending-it wasn't "lame" at all. Started well, ended well, and kept a great level of humor throughout, effectively capturing the characters and their personalities.

Great job!

(Work on the Glory Story next!)

-Bekah

That was very well written, but no offense, Dewey and Ms. Mullins together grosses me out! Haha sorry! But even if it does freak me out I still very much enjoyed it so far and I will keep reading!

aw... how sweet

more please

vamp

please write some more soon its a great story

Aww, that's adorable. Although it seemed to take you forever to update. But, who cares? You finally did. My favourite line of the whole chapter: 'up Dewey thought jealously.' Just made me start cracking up, because it's totally true. Great job and please update soon!

"Romeo in a Toyota",

"each distinctive face gaining eerily similar expressions of shock",

"Dewey felt the need to restore a healthy level of chaos to the group",

"Wow, a Monty Python impression. There’s a great way to bag a babe",

"She asked the apparition of Dewey for a thermometer",

and my favorite, "Do you want some of this pink crap?"

Just quoting a few of things in this chapter that really stuck out at me. If you can do better than what you've already done, the great writer (my idol) Edgar Allen Poe will roll over in his grave, because (and I've stated it before), this is just BRILLIANT! I really like this story, because it's so...it's just not the usual telling-not-showing, everyday, cliche, done a thousand times, crap. THIS IS ACTUALLY NEXT TO GODLINESS.

Oh, and on my last review (which got cut off), I was *trying* to say, I'm sorry if I seem a little instense in my reviews, but good writing does affect me in an almost orgasmic way. Not much can be done about it.

It's just so well put together. I can only say, I bow to my superior. This story rocks in so many ways...m...my mom just brought me a piece of cake...(sorry, off topic) NOW, what was I saying? Oh, I was shamelessly praising you, short of licking the ground you've walked on, and worshipping you're insanely impressive story.

WRITE MORE SOON!

(Where does your writing ability come from? I've theorized that my - while not as good as yours, but aptly available - writing ability comes from my bellybutton.) I know, I'm a little on the weird side, but you'll get over it, or join me...whichever.

UPDATEs are like candy, they taste good, but only last so long, and leave you craving more.

Did you know that your story is about a year old?

I'm sorry, I'm gone. TO EAT CAKE! Later...

M...even as I was annoyed with the non-double spacing of the paragraphs (made it hard to read), I stuck with it and kept on. Shows my newfound devotion to this story. I liked the mention of the "pod people" and "bodysnatchers", vintage horror/sci-fi references. Brought a smile to my work-worn face.

I really wish I could give you some good criticism, something that would help you to write better, but then...I'm not even on the same level as you, so how can I point out any thing? Where could I even begin...in this masterful piece...I guess you're on your own, and hey, you are your own worst critic. Anything I could tell you, you've probably already told yourself 100 times personified. I don't even know if that's the write word, between the dizzying brilliance of your story, and the massive fatigue after a six hour shift at the Hut, my brain is mush.

PLEASE KEEP WRITING! KEEP FEEDING MY PASSION FOR THE WRITTEN WORD!

(sorry if I seem a little in

You know, usually I skip ahead to see how (and that's if) the kids are paired, and depending on it, I back out or continue forward. But reading this, I don't even care how the kids are paired, I just want more of this story! I loved the potential of a Dewey/Mullins relationship, and hated how they didn't go on it in the movie.

People tell me my fics are good and that they're the best they've ever read. All I have to say is, they should come read your's, then they'll trash mine, because this is simply DIVINE storytelling. Your wordplay is so AWESOME! God, I could just drink this, it's just...jeez.

I'm gonna go read more. Keep writing, keep updating, KEEP WRITING (seriously, just write, all the time, anything. You have so much talent with words, if you even take five minutes to not write, then that's five minutes that the world suffers), and just keep rocking! I'm gonna go read the next chapter.

oh...my...God...you are the best writer on the face of the earth. Normally, right about now, I'd be screaming at you for not posting sooner, but it was truly worth the wait. I like the new plot twists, and I truly worship your knowlege of the rock-ology. I bow at the feet of Victoria!

HOLY CRAP THAT'S A WARREN ZEVON SONG! YOU KICK ASS!

OMG YOU MUST UPDATE! YOU ARE THE ONLY HUMAN BEING ALIVE ON TO WRITE A DEWEY/ROS STORY, ESPECIALLY WITH CHARACTERIZATION THIS GOOD! (except one of my friends who is writing one, but she's not all that good a writer.) YOU SERIOUSLY ROCK (PARDON THE PUN)! UPDATE !