Any hope for more? I like it.

Not bad for the characters, a rather ecletic choice of weapons, but I like it. Perhaps a little more character exploration?

I don't suppose you're ever going to finish this are you? *looks hopeful*

I like your characters and I think you describe them well and in such a way as to draw the the reader in. Dakk fascinates me. And I must remember that use for Ice in case I ever come across an appropriate ingame situation. ;)