Rubbish

I am so glad to be finished with this so called story, it consisted of more reviews than story.. I did not enjoy this at all and will not be reading further stories from this writer !

Chapters are too small ,reviews are too long

Why don’t you take super short chapters and
Make them into many since you have so much chapters

What happened to paragraphs instead of one big string of sentences. It makes it hard to read.

I like the plot but it seems like Snape is being TOO out of character in this story. I know it is AU but he should still be in character.

And it's saying something that the smell nearly made Voldemort gag when he doesn't have a nose, lol, the book's great, btw

snape is Sooo OC i kinda like it

Dude it's spelled vilas not what your saying, sorry but the way you are spelling it is so wrong, if you need references you should look in the books, please!

Just FYI, Hermione returns and comes over to talk with Harry and Hermione

Do you even know the definition of ‘meanwhile?’ (Along with not knowing how to use punctuation) It means ‘at the same time,’ so saying ‘meanwhile before...’ is absolute gibberish. You must be a Hufflepuff.

Did you know that a lot of your punctuation is incorrect?

The first chapter was meh, I skipped most of this. This chapter, however, made me laugh! I enjoyed Severus pretending to be a reporter, cool idea.

Also, perhaps a pro-tip: the "Severus goes to Voldy" scene could have been expanded a little. The dialogue is too...on the nose? "Severus, you're late. Crucio. Bye." Perhaps reference some off-screen dastardly plot against the Ministry or any other topic of interest to Voldy and Death Eaters? It might make the scene more realistic.

Wow! This is the best fan fiction I've ever read. Thank you for writing this interesting story. I love it! And the way you wrote the war part is really really cool. I'm addicted to this story.

Very good story!