This is a pretty dark interpretation of what the Kankers could very well turn into if they ever learned to get bolder with their sexual advances. It turns from molestation and harassment to full-on rape. I gotta say I'm having a blast writing a fic where they arguably get their just desserts in a form kind of like "Twist of the Ed" but far worse in a planned home invasion. Good stuff.

I know this is an old fic and the author might not even be on here anymore but I just feel compelled to leave this review, and it's been a long time coming. This was actually one of the first fanfics I ever read way back in like 2010 and it was the FIRST fanfic I read where I was completely blown away by how emotional, well written, and powerful it was.

Most of the stories on this site are either average or subpar, but if you look hard enough you'll eventually find a diamond in the rough every once in a while. A story that stands above all the others and that's what makes this site worth it. THIS fic was my first "diamond" that I'd ever come across and it's what got me hooked on this site and I've been hooked ever since (hard to believe it's been a decade since I found this site and read this fic).

That being said, I wanted to leave a review on this fic since it was the first AMAZING fic I came across and motivated me to try and find other amazing fics over the years. But this will always be the first. IDK if the author is still on this site or if he'll ever read this, but this fic is a masterpiece and it led to me looking for other masterpieces like it, thank you so much for this brilliant work of literature.

THIS IS WHY I DESPISE KANKERS THE MOST. PEOPLE WHO SHIP THE EDS TO THE KANKERS DISGUST ME. THEY ARE SICK PEOPLE WHO NEEDS HELP AND NEED TO EXPERIENCE DAILY LIFE OF SEXUAL HARASSMENT SO THEY CAN REALIZE WHAT THE EDS FEEL. FUCING SICK PEOPLE

This is very surreal. A palpable palpitation of actions and thoughts coursing through this story. I always got the sense that the Kankers would do something kind of similar to this in actuality - not rape - but persuasion with consent.

That being said, the fact this is the first story with the Kankers raping the Eds (in actuality) that I've seen and read means something to me and the fandom. That everyone understands the morality of the Kankers. Also, that this kind of story was inevitable.

I'm rambling.

This story captured emotions across all three Eds that are real. Double D's self-sacrifice, Ed's innocence, and Eddy's realization enforces that and breaks my heart.

Also, I love your stories.

I normally don't read things like this but I have been watching this show again alot recently and have started to really notice the patterns here. It really does show that these things shouldn't just be taken seriously with girls but boys too. This is the kind of thing that can happen if such behavior goes unchecked. I know this is based on fictional characters but this does spill out on to real life so if that was the purpose here to show this then I must say it was spelled out well. Also the terrible trauma that comes afterwords. If anything I believe the show was trying to make that clear in a subtle way that boys can be victims of girls just as much as the other way around.

So well written

This was written insanely well. The part about Ed asking "why" "why" "why" was heartbreaking. /3

I was impressed. Good writing, well established, and quite heart wrenching...damn good writing.

This is a very chilling, cruel and emotional story. You wrote this beautifully, and brought light to an issue that doesn't see much attention - men being raped by women. Excuse me, I think I need to go cry.

I just want to hug them all and pet their heads like "it's alright, I'm here."

You made a great story. Keep doing stuff like this. I hope to read more from you

o-o Holy shit those evil rapist bitches they force the Eds into having sex with them and the kids didn't do shit. The Eds are now scarred for life please make a sequel to this I have to see what happens next will those evil Kankers get a life sentence they're probably pregnant with the Eds kids after what happened those bitches need to pay. Someone call The Punisher to kill those rapist bitches in the most brutal way possible.

wow, all i can say is wow. i always thought the Kankers would do that, but my mind was blown away at how great you wrote this.

Make's me wonder if anyone even cared about the Eds. Especially the cub-da-sac they should've save them and what about Sarah didn't she get the feeling that her older brother was in trouble. Well I think the kids of the cub-da-sac are heartless for letting that happened. Then again the kids might not have known what have happened to the Eds and even if they did knew they probally wouldn't care they'll most likely think the Eds deserved it. I think the next chapter or the sequal to this should revolve around an angel who cared about what happened to the Eds and wants to punished the Kankers for raping the Eds, or have a vegilanti go out and kill the Kankers. Ether way the Kankers must pay for want they did.

Awh! This is so sad! But it's so good! Awwwh!

I always thought, "Gosh, what if the Kankers raped them?" because they're such perverts, anyway.

This was so good. Your writing is awesome.