This is really good. I hope there would be a sequel.

This was super cute! I love the way you wrote these characters.

I think pointless fluff is my favourite kind of one-shot. It's just so... easy to read, calming and cute :3
This was really, really cute. I liked it a lot!

Aww omg

Awee that was sooo adorable ! I loved it so much. I loved the way you described them playing fighting around in the water and it was so perfect I love the bond that they share and this story made me feel really warm and fuzzy

Please tell me that Killua asks for a kiss...!
This was so sweet! Love it!

Awww thats it? D:

And so I just realized that you were the same author of Eat me, haunt me and that other one. Lol XD Anyways, another adorable work from you! Honestly, your at good at writing them that I really want to hug you to death right now... Ok, not to death but still... Thank you so much for writing this! I adore your other HxH fics as well. Happy writing!~ -

Please continue

So unbelievably beautiful, romantic and sweet
Thank you for Sticking to their persona and making this feel so real
I loved it

That was so beautifully written, and I think you wrote into each of the characters personalities perfectly. It was a beautiful story which lifted my heart, while at the same time left a slight tinge of sadness there... Err... I mean, the ending... It gave me the slight impression that this was a sad story.

I wish there was a continuation of this. That I would like to see (read).

it needs more to it, like maybe one or two more chapters... i wanna know what happens after Killua lets go off Gon and what happens when they find out that they love oneanother

I loved it! Kyaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Great Job!

Its totally great!wish there was more.

That was really great! If you could continue, that would be nice (considering how much potential this story has) but still, good job!