Will the story be updated any time soon .. like, in this century! (Kaiba's icy glare)

i need more

Ha! Love all the talking alter-egos! And their usually right! It's awesome. At first I thought that it was going to be Yami/Seto, but now it seems to be heading towards a Bakura/Seto route. Fun times! I was really surprised about the Yami/Mokuba, but the age difference there, whether physical or metaphysical kinda gives me the icks. Please update soon! I'd love to see how all of these relationships turn out! And when/how Seto finds out that he's the reincarnation of the High Priest!

XD
So much yaoi love...I dont even remember when I got into it anymore...
Bakuras becoming nice Bakuras becoming nice...in subtle sort of way...I think
Seto does have too many stalkers XD stalkers...

i hope you continue this story soon

without doubt the best story I've read on this site so far, hope to read more soon :D

i hope you continue this but id like to see more interaction with the brothers and their foster parents :I

Keep going PLz

I really like this story. It's too bad it hasn't been updated in a while. I was wondering how old Mokuba is supposed to be in it.

Oh my Ra! It has been awhile since I have read to Yu-Gi-Oh fanfiction. I actually just recently got back into the series. I must say Goddess33 you are a very good writer. The relationships and plot elements are all amazing. I love the Seto/Bakura relationship, this is the first time I have encountered it. I am sad that there hasn't been an update in over four years. *sigh* I really wish you would finish it. Please? Overall, wonderful story! Even if you don't finish this one do keep writing. You have a natural talent.

JA!

~EH~

well I'm guessing that you are not going to up date this fic but it would make my day

I feel bad for Noa, I really liked his character in the anime. And you made him rather lovable in this ficcy too. but everyone treats him like dirt. What's the point of keeping him in the story if you're only going to bash his character?

Anyways, I was wondering, Bakura doesn't have a soul guardian or whatever, but what about Ryou? He should have someone looking out for his pure soul, shouldn't he?

Ra as a toddler is so cute.

A very good story, with an excellent plot. i like the way you kept with the cannon, whilst twisting it. The whole Bakura and Set Pairing is inspired-i haven't even come across it before, in any of the Fic's I've read.

It'd be great if you could update more, though. You wrote that you have started to go off Yu-Gi-Oh, but you could at least make the effort to finish it off.

I can see for a fact that you're still writing other fics for Naruto, so you haven't just given up Fic writing. Anyway, that's just a minor niggle.

Love the strange pairings- Mokuba and Yami is sweet and original, and Noa stalking Seto is very funny. I'm guessing that without the attitude, you made him seem much more attractive, which is why Marik, Bakura and Noa all fancy him.

Malik fancying Yugi is strange, but more than understandable. The way you portray Marim and Malik's relationship and its evolution is very good. Instead of, like most people, taking a Yami/Hitari approach to writing Bakura/Ryoud, Yami/Yugi and Marik/Malik, you wrote it more true to the Anime, and kept it realistic, instead of just letting them do whatever.

All in all, i can't wait for the time you next update. 9/10

I love it! Too bad you haven't updated for two years! I hope you don't plan on discontinuing this fic!