| Reviews for A Fractured State |
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  WhenInRomy chapter 1 . 7/13/2018 Only just stumbled across this story. Choc-a-bloc full of Romy-ance with action, drama & suspense filled goodness. Wowsers! Your flow and attention to detail was captivating... kept me guessing. Def a fave. Kelly Thompson could def take a leaf out of this wonderful story you have created. Well done! |
 Irish-Chick13 chapter 6 . 12/1/2012 This was amazing! Easily my favorite I have wad in a very long time! Thank you! |
| ali chapter 1 . 1/10/2012 just finished chapter one, loving this so far! it's so wonderfully written. |
| Warrior Priestess chapter 6 . 2/6/2009 Twisted. Wicked. *Nods* |
| selina chapter 6 . 1/14/2009 Why the hell can't Marvel be this frakkin brilliant when it comes to Remy/Rouge. I feel like mailing this story over to them, as an example of how issues can be resolved and trust built. I really enjoyed the journey that they went through. It was fun seeing them going through all the different arcs that Marvel has gone through with the X-Men and having you show how that can permanently damage Rogue. It was also great that the experience together brought them together. Nice writing, with a great mix of action/adventure/ and bit of romance. Selina |
| Miss DnG chapter 6 . 11/29/2008 A very interesting story, deep and complex, I think you did a really good job of the different lives she had, that could have been unbeleivably difficult and thoroughly confusing but you wrote it well and did a good job of it :) |
| RoguesHeart chapter 6 . 11/30/2003 AW DAT WAS SO CUTE! |
| Calypso2 chapter 6 . 8/22/2003 Oh that was amazing, I'm sorry it's over. I think you need to add an epilogue! The story held me entranced and I couldn't tear myself away. I'm just amazed by your talent! Truly extraordinary. :) |
| beanarie chapter 6 . 6/26/2003 Very good story. I loved the way you used the astral plane as a primary location. |
| Lynette chapter 6 . 5/20/2003 I loved reading this story, it was so well written. You have a real talent for description. GREAT WORK! |
| cornish-pixy chapter 6 . 5/5/2003 beautiful. utterly and completely beautiful. i'm at a loss for words. this is truly very well written and i'm green with envy. |
| cornish-pixy chapter 2 . 4/29/2003 nicely written, you have a great way with words! |
| cornish-pixy chapter 1 . 4/29/2003 i really like this story, keep up the great work : ) |
| Misa1124 chapter 6 . 3/22/2003 Wow. Just, wow. I was thoroughly engrossed the entire time. Bravo! |
| Rupeshwari chapter 6 . 3/22/2003 This fic gets better everytime I read it. I've said it before and I'll kepp right on saying it, wonderful job. :) |
